Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, 'grow books' is incorrect; you likely meant 'borrow books'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'learning learning'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep sentences concise.

예시: I usually go to the library once a week because I enjoy reading. It is a quiet place where I can focus, and I often borrow books to read at home. This helps me relax during my free time and improve my knowledge.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by avoiding repetition and using better linking words. For example, 'focus in my studies and assignment' should be 'focus on my studies and assignments'. Also, try to combine sentences to make your answer more natural and fluent.

예시: I usually go to the library to study because the peaceful atmosphere helps me concentrate better. Additionally, I sometimes read books there to relax and learn new things.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. For example, 'I like to go' should be 'I liked to go', and 'What's such interesting pictures given in the book?' is confusing. Try to use past tense consistently and explain your ideas clearly with linking words.

예시: When I was a kid, I liked going to the library because I enjoyed reading storybooks with colorful pictures. The pictures made the stories more interesting, so I always looked forward to visiting the library.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. For example, 'Will many Chinese kids often go' is incorrect; it should be 'Many Chinese kids often go'. Also, 'Libraries provides' should be 'Libraries provide'. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using proper sentence structure.

예시: Many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents and schools encourage reading outside the classroom. Libraries provide a quiet environment that helps them study and improve their knowledge.

× The library is a quiet place where I can focus and I often grow books to read at home as well.

✓ The library is a quiet place where I can focus and I often borrow books to read at home as well.

The word 'grow' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'borrow' when taking books from the library. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar issue, but it affects sentence meaning.

× This helps me relax in my free time and learning learning.

✓ This helps me relax in my free time and learn.

The phrase 'learning learning' is incorrect and redundant. The verb 'learn' should be in its base form after 'helps me' to indicate purpose or result.

× I like the peaceful atmosphere which makes it easier to focus in my studies and assignment without distraction.

✓ I like the peaceful atmosphere which makes it easier to focus on my studies and assignments without distraction.

The word 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the plural 'studies'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to focusing on something.

× I like the peaceful atmosphere which makes it easier to focus in my studies and assignment without distraction.

✓ I like the peaceful atmosphere which makes it easier to focus on my studies and assignments without distraction.

The correct preposition after 'focus' is 'on', not 'in'. This is a common preposition error.

× When I was a kid, I like to go to the library because I enjoy reading small story books with their pictures.

✓ When I was a kid, I liked to go to the library because I enjoyed reading small story books with their pictures.

The sentence refers to past time ('When I was a kid'), so verbs 'like' and 'enjoy' should be in past tense 'liked' and 'enjoyed'.

× What's such interesting pictures given in the book?

✓ What interesting pictures are given in the book?

The original sentence is ungrammatical. The correct question form is 'What interesting pictures are given in the book?'

× So I always like to go to library in my past.

✓ So I always liked to go to the library in the past.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'in my past' is unnatural; 'in the past' is correct. Verb tense adjusted to past 'liked'.

× Will many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents and school encourage them to read outside the class?

✓ Many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents and school encourage them to read outside the class.

The modal verb 'Will' is incorrectly used in a question form here. The sentence is a statement, so 'Will' should be removed.

× Libraries provides a quiet environment to them to study and assist many.

✓ Libraries provide a quiet environment for them to study and assist many.

The plural subject 'Libraries' requires the plural verb 'provide'. Also, 'to them' should be 'for them' to indicate purpose.