Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "I often go to the library" twice. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct grammar, for example, "it's a really quiet place where you can read, study, and write."

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a quiet place where I can read, study, and write without distractions.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms like "I usually study or read books." Also, avoid unclear expressions such as "not approached." Try to give clear and specific reasons or descriptions about the library.

예시: In the library, I usually study or read books because it is a peaceful environment that helps me concentrate.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same sentence. For example, say "I didn't like the library when I was a kid, but now I appreciate it more."

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't enjoy it, but now I find it very useful.

제안: Your answer is too short and contains grammatical mistakes. Instead of saying "I'm not from Chinese," say "I'm not from China." Also, try to give a more complete answer, even if you are unsure, by expressing your opinion or guessing politely.

예시: I'm not from China, so I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library to study and read.

× I really like it because it's really quiet place you there you can read, study, write and many good things for you.

✓ I really like it because it's a really quiet place where you can read, study, write, and do many good things for yourself.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'really quiet place' and misuses 'you there' instead of 'where you'. Also, 'many good things for you' is unclear and should be 'do many good things for yourself' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× In the library I usually studying or reading the book.

✓ In the library, I usually study or read books.

The verb 'studying' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; the base form 'study' should be used. Also, 'reading the book' is better as 'read books' to generalize the activity.

× This place is very good for doll I I think that this place the library is not approached.

✓ This place is very good for me. I think that this library is not crowded.

'Good for doll I' is incorrect; it should be 'good for me'. The phrase 'not approached' is incorrect in this context; 'not crowded' fits better to express the intended meaning.

× No I didn't. I didn't like the library when I was a kid and now I think that I was full that I don't like. I didn't like the library. Sorry for wrong.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't like the library when I was a kid, and now I think I was wrong to dislike it. I didn't like the library before. Sorry for the mistake.

The phrase 'I was full that I don't like' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I was wrong to dislike it' to express regret. Also, 'Sorry for wrong' should be 'Sorry for the mistake'.

× Oh, I don't know, 'cause I'm not from Chinese.

✓ Oh, I don't know, because I'm not Chinese.

The phrase 'not from Chinese' is incorrect. The correct form is 'not Chinese' to indicate nationality. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness.