Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, you can say: "Yes, I often go to the library because it's quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate on my studies."

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it's quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate on my studies.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by using simpler, more natural language and linking your ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'books' too often. For example: "I enjoy reading a variety of books in the library because it allows me to learn new things and expand my knowledge."

예시: I enjoy reading a variety of books in the library because it allows me to learn new things and expand my knowledge.

제안: This answer is unclear and unnatural. Try to express your idea more clearly and use correct grammar. For example: "No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I wasn't interested in reading books; I preferred playing games."

예시: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I wasn't interested in reading books; I preferred playing games.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Also, the reasoning is not very clear. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example: "Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries to improve their knowledge and study."

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries to improve their knowledge and study.

× Definitely I like to go library because in the library I easily concentrate on my studies because there is no crowd or noise in the library.

✓ Definitely I like to go to the library because in the library I can easily concentrate on my studies as there is no crowd or noise.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'because' is repeated unnecessarily; replacing the second 'because' with 'as' improves sentence flow. The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× Definitely I like to go library because in the library I easily concentrate on my studies because there is no crowd or noise in the library.

✓ Definitely I like to go to the library because in the library I can easily concentrate on my studies as there is no crowd or noise.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating a destination. Omitting 'to' before 'library' is incorrect.

× Being a bibliophile, I like to read books in the library. I explore all the books in the library and I gain a lot of knowledge from the books.

✓ Being a bibliophile, I like to read books in the library. I explore all the books in the library and gain a lot of knowledge from them.

Repeating 'the books' is redundant; replacing the second instance with 'them' improves clarity. The definite article 'the' is correctly used before 'library'.

× Definitely not because when I was child I have no trust to read books. I only play games.

✓ Definitely not because when I was a child I had no interest in reading books. I only played games.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. 'Trust to read books' is incorrect; 'interest in reading books' is more appropriate. 'Play' should be in past tense 'played'.

× Definitely China is a developing country, so the child of China country usually go to library for gain more knowledge.

✓ Definitely, China is a developing country, so children in China usually go to the library to gain more knowledge.

'Child' should be plural 'children' to match the general statement. 'China country' is redundant; 'in China' is correct. 'Go' should be 'go' (plural subject 'children' matches 'go'). 'To library' requires the definite article 'the'. 'For gain' should be 'to gain'.