Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there is a small grammatical error ('provide' should be 'provides') and some redundancy in 'environment provide a quiet and comfortable environment'. Try to avoid repeating the same word unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't often go to the library, but I usually visit it when I need to prepare for exams or complete important tasks because it provides a quiet and comfortable atmosphere. For instance, last month I spent many hours there studying for my final exams.

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words such as 'however' or 'moreover'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like 'comfortable and quiet' and 'focus on my tasks without any distraction' which are somewhat redundant. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express these ideas.

예시: Sometimes I go to the library to read books that I don't want to buy. However, most of the time, I use it to study for exams or complete assignments because the quiet and comfortable environment helps me concentrate without distractions.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy, such as 'are there were' and 'It is very it was very efficient'. Also, try to use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I liked reading books. There were many books to choose from, and since I had a lot of assignments, I often went there to finish my homework efficiently.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors such as 'went to there'. Also, try to avoid repeating 'kids' and 'library' too often. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details if possible.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. When I was a child, many children in my hometown frequently visited the library to read books and complete their homework.

× The environment provide a quiet and comfortable environment for me to concentrate on the tasks.

✓ The environment provides a quiet and comfortable environment for me to concentrate on the tasks.

The subject 'environment' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× But most of the time I go to library to study for my exams or complete my assignments.

✓ But most of the time I go to the library to study for my exams or complete my assignments.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× In the library, there are there were a lot of books for me to choose and read and also I had a lot of assignments.

✓ In the library, there were a lot of books for me to choose and read, and I also had a lot of assignments.

The phrase 'there are there were' is redundant and incorrect. Since the sentence refers to the past, 'there were' is correct. Also, the sentence structure is improved by separating the clauses properly.

× When I was a kid, there were a lot of kids in the library in my hometown and they often went to there to read books and finish their homework.

✓ When I was a kid, there were a lot of kids in the library in my hometown and they often went there to read books and finish their homework.

The phrase 'went to there' is incorrect because 'there' already indicates a place. The correct form is 'went there' without the preposition 'to'.