Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat, seperti 'article' seharusnya 'articles'. Selain itu, kalimat bisa dibuat lebih ringkas dan alami. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung ke inti jawaban.

예시: No, I don't go to the library often nowadays. But when I was in high school and college, I used to visit it regularly to study and find books or articles to help with my assignments. I found the library to be a quiet and helpful place to focus on my work.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat, seperti 'read article' seharusnya 'read articles' dan 'chess study' yang kurang jelas maksudnya. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik aktivitas Anda di perpustakaan.

예시: In the library, I usually read books and articles to prepare for my exams. I also enjoy playing chess there sometimes because the comfortable atmosphere motivates me to study more.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi kalimat terakhir 'Since then I have found it.' kurang lengkap dan membingungkan. Cobalah untuk menyelesaikan kalimat tersebut dengan informasi yang lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk memperjelas hubungan antar kalimat.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because no one encouraged me. I only started visiting it in high school to study and borrow books for my classes. Since then, I have found the library very useful for my studies.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat, seperti 'some bookstore like real media' yang kurang jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, serta tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: Not really. From my experience, many Chinese kids prefer to buy books from bookstores like Real Media instead of borrowing them from the library.

× I often went there to study and look for books or article that could help me with my assignment.

✓ I often went there to study and look for books or articles that could help me with my assignment.

The word 'article' should be plural 'articles' to match the plural 'books' and to correctly refer to multiple items that could help with the assignment.

× In a library, I usually read some books, read article or chess study to prepare my exam because I find it very comfy and the ambience made me want to study more.

✓ In a library, I usually read some books, read articles, or study chess to prepare for my exam because I find it very comfortable and the ambience makes me want to study more.

The word 'article' should be plural 'articles' to be consistent with 'books'. Also, 'chess study' is better expressed as 'study chess'. 'Comfy' is informal; 'comfortable' is more appropriate. 'Ambience made' should be 'ambience makes' to maintain present tense consistency.

× In a library, I usually read some books, read article or chess study to prepare my exam because I find it very comfy and the ambience made me want to study more.

✓ In a library, I usually read some books, read articles, or study chess to prepare for my exam because I find it very comfortable and the ambience makes me want to study more.

The phrase 'prepare my exam' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'prepare for my exam'.