Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現を修正し、より自然で効果的な回答にしましょう。例えば、「there is so quiet」は「it is very quiet」と言い換え、「my study can be great」は「I can concentrate better」と表現すると良いです。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library when I study for school exams because it is very quiet there, and I can concentrate better.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、より具体的で論理的な回答にしましょう。例えば、「at there」は「there」で十分で、「book about nurseries」は「books about nursing」に修正し、理由を明確に述べると良いです。

예시: I often study there, and sometimes I borrow books about nursing because I want to become a nurse in the future.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいので、正しい文法と語彙を使い、簡潔に答えましょう。例えば、「I like it to playing outside」は「I liked playing outside」に直し、「rivalry」は「library」に修正してください。

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I liked playing outside. I often played soccer or tennis with my brother.

제안: 曖昧な表現や繰り返しを避け、明確で自然な回答を心がけましょう。「passionable」は誤用なので「passionate」に直し、「lively」は「library」に修正してください。

예시: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because the country is very passionate about studying.

× Yes I do when I study for the school examination because there is so quiet and my study can be great.

✓ Yes I do when I study for the school examination because it is so quiet and my study can be great.

The phrase 'there is so quiet' is incorrect because 'quiet' is an adjective describing the environment, not a noun. The correct expression is 'it is so quiet' to describe the state of the library. 'There is' is used to indicate existence of something, which is not appropriate here.

× I I often study at there and also I sometimes borrow the book about nurseries because I want to be a nurse in the future.

✓ I often study there and also sometimes borrow books about nurseries because I want to be a nurse in the future.

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary before 'there' because 'there' already indicates location. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to match the general meaning. Removing redundant words improves clarity.

× No really because I like it to playing outside so I played a soccer or playing tennis with my brother when I child. So I didn't go to the rivalry when I was a kid.

✓ No, really, because I liked playing outside so I played soccer or played tennis with my brother when I was a child. So I didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

The verb tense should be past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Like it to playing' is incorrect; correct form is 'liked playing'. 'A soccer' is incorrect; 'soccer' is uncountable here. 'Playing tennis' should be parallel with 'played soccer', so 'played tennis'. 'Rivalry' is a wrong word; correct word is 'library'.

× No really because I like it to playing outside so I played a soccer or playing tennis with my brother when I child. So I didn't go to the rivalry when I was a kid.

✓ No, really, because I liked playing outside so I played soccer or played tennis with my brother when I was a child. So I didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'when I child' is missing the article 'a' and should be 'when I was a child'. Also, 'to playing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'liked playing'. 'Rivalry' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'library'.

× I'm not sure, but umm, I think I think so because umm, the country is, you know, passionable for studying. So I think Chinese people often go to their lively.

✓ I'm not sure, but umm, I think so because, umm, the country is, you know, passionate about studying. So I think Chinese people often go to their library.

The word 'passionable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'passionate'. The phrase 'passionate for studying' should be 'passionate about studying'. 'Lively' is incorrect; the correct word is 'library'.