Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't go to the library very often because I have a busy schedule. Instead, I usually search for information on my phone or computer, which is more convenient for me.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually look for new information in books. Additionally, I use the library's computers to find interesting topics online.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ và cấu trúc câu cho đúng. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác và câu quá dài. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: When I was a kid, libraries were not common in my hometown, so I rarely went. However, when I visited the city, I took the opportunity to explore the library and find interesting books, which I later bought at a bookstore.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: From my experience, Chinese children do not visit libraries very often nowadays. Instead, they prefer staying at home and searching for information on the Internet because it is faster and more convenient.

× I don't have much time to go to places like library, so whenever I want to look up new information, I could prefer opening my phones or computers to search for it on the Internet.

✓ I don't have much time to go to places like the library, so whenever I want to look up new information, I prefer opening my phone or computer to search for it on the Internet.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'phones' and 'computers' should be singular here because the speaker likely uses one device at a time. 'Could prefer' is incorrect modal usage; 'prefer' alone is appropriate here.

× I could prefer opening my phones or computers to search for it on the Internet.

✓ I prefer opening my phone or computer to search for it on the Internet.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrectly used with 'prefer'. 'Prefer' is a stative verb and does not usually combine with 'could' in this context. The correct form is simply 'I prefer'. Also, 'phones' and 'computers' should be singular as the speaker likely uses one device at a time.

× whenever I have a chance to go to the library I could spend time to looking for new information through books

✓ whenever I have a chance to go to the library I could spend time looking for new information through books

After the phrase 'spend time', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. The phrase 'to looking' is incorrect; it should be 'looking'.

× I will take advantage of the technological devices on the library to find some interesting things.

✓ I will take advantage of the technological devices in the library to find some interesting things.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to something inside a place like a library. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× whenever I have a chance to go to the city and visit the library, yeah, I could take advantage of the chance to looking for some interesting books

✓ whenever I have a chance to go to the city and visit the library, yeah, I could take advantage of the chance to look for some interesting books

After 'take advantage of the chance to', the verb should be in the base form 'look' not the '-ing' form 'looking'.

× and then I will find it in the bookstore at my.

✓ and then I will find it in the bookstore near my home.

The phrase 'at my' is incomplete and unclear. It should specify a location, such as 'near my home' or 'at my place' to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× Instead of that they will prefer staying at home and searching for and search for information on the Internet.

✓ Instead of that, they prefer staying at home and searching for information on the Internet.

The phrase 'searching for and search for' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'will prefer' is less natural here; simple present 'prefer' is better to express habitual action. A comma after 'Instead of that' improves sentence clarity.