Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "on my iPad on ebook application"; instead, say "on my iPad using an ebook app." Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually read on my iPad using an ebook app, which is more convenient and easier for me.

제안: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your answer with more specific details.

예시: I usually visit my university library because it has massage chairs, and I enjoy relaxing by getting a massage while studying.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more engaging.

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I often went there with my friends to write cartoons and share our ideas.

제안: Avoid grammatical errors such as "they are study hard." Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to be more confident and precise in your answer.

예시: I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I have heard that they study hard and spend a lot of time studying by themselves; therefore, I think they often go to the library.

× I can read on my iPad on ebook application and it is easier and more convenient for me to read on the gadgets.

✓ I can read on my iPad using an ebook application and it is easier and more convenient for me to read on gadgets.

The phrase 'on ebook application' is incorrect because 'on' is not the proper preposition here. The correct preposition is 'using' to indicate the method or tool. Also, 'the gadgets' is incorrect because 'gadgets' is a general plural noun and does not need 'the'. Suggestion: Use 'using an ebook application' and omit 'the' before 'gadgets'.

× I usually go to the library in my university because the library there, there are massage chairs and I like to take a massage from the chairs.

✓ I usually go to the library in my university because there are massage chairs there and I like to get a massage from the chairs.

The sentence has incorrect word order and redundancy with 'the library there, there are'. The correct structure is 'there are massage chairs there'. Also, 'take a massage' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get a massage'. Suggestion: Use 'there are massage chairs there' and 'get a massage'.

× Yes, I went to a library when I was a kid because I went there with my friends to write cartoons.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I went there with my friends to write cartoons.

When referring to a specific library known to both speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' should be used instead of 'a'. Here, the library is specific as it is the one the speaker used as a kid. Suggestion: Use 'the library' instead of 'a library'.

× I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I have heard that they are study hard and spend a lot of time to study by themselves, so I think that they go to the library often.

✓ I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I have heard that they study hard and spend a lot of time studying by themselves, so I think that they go to the library often.

The phrase 'they are study hard' is incorrect because 'study' should be in base form after 'they' without 'are'. Also, 'spend a lot of time to study' should be 'spend a lot of time studying' because 'spend time' is followed by a gerund. Suggestion: Use 'they study hard' and 'spend a lot of time studying'.