Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Misalnya, perbaiki kalimat terakhir yang terputus dan gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'so' untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda.

예시: I don't go to the library very often, maybe only once a month, because there are fewer libraries in my city. Also, my busy work schedule makes it difficult for me to find the right time to visit. However, I really love the quiet and peaceful environment of the library, so I try to go whenever I can.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menggunakan bentuk jamak yang benar dan kata kerja yang sesuai. Selain itu, gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dengan lebih baik.

예시: I really love to read various kinds of books, such as fiction, nonfiction, and self-help books. I also enjoy studying there because the ambience is quiet, which really helps me concentrate and learn better.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah baik dan cukup lengkap. Namun, perhatikan penggunaan tense yang konsisten dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih lancar. Misalnya, gunakan 'loved' untuk masa lalu dan tambahkan 'and' atau 'also' untuk menghubungkan ide.

예시: Yes, I loved going to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading story books. I was fascinated by exploring different topics, which helped me develop my learning skills. Also, I appreciated the quiet and peaceful environment, which made it easier to concentrate.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan pendapat Anda dengan lebih baik. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan perbaiki penggunaan kata benda dan kata kerja.

예시: Honestly, I haven't studied in the same school as Chinese kids, so I don't know their habits. However, I think they often go to the library because Chinese culture values reading and education highly.

× Well, I don't go to the library very often, maybe only once in a month, because there are fewer libraries in my cities.

✓ Well, I don't go to the library very often, maybe only once a month, because there are fewer libraries in my city.

The phrase 'once in a month' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'once a month'. Also, 'cities' should be singular 'city' if referring to one city. Use singular when referring to one place and the correct time expression for frequency.

× Also, my busy work schedule make it difficult for me to find the right time to visit.

✓ Also, my busy work schedule makes it difficult for me to find the right time to visit.

The subject 'my busy work schedule' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. Using 'make' is incorrect for singular subjects.

× However, I really love the environment of the library and I love.

✓ However, I really love the environment of the library.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and I love' which is incomplete and causes a sentence structure error. Removing the incomplete phrase corrects the sentence.

× I like to read various kind of books such as fiction, nonfiction and self help book.

✓ I like to read various kinds of books such as fiction, nonfiction, and self-help books.

'Various kind' should be plural 'various kinds' because it refers to multiple types. Also, 'self help book' should be plural 'self-help books' to match the plural 'books' and hyphenate 'self-help' as a compound adjective.

× I also enjoy studying there because the ambience and environment is quiet and it's really support me to learn.

✓ I also enjoy studying there because the ambience and environment are quiet and they really support me to learn.

The compound subject 'ambience and environment' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'it's' (it is) should be 'they' to refer to the plural subject, and 'support' needs to agree with 'they'.

× Yes, I really love going to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading story books.

✓ Yes, I really loved going to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading story books.

The action refers to the past, so 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to maintain tense consistency with 'was' and 'enjoyed'.

× Besides that, I appreciate quiet and peaceful environment which made it easier to concentrate.

✓ Besides that, I appreciate the quiet and peaceful environment which made it easier to concentrate.

The noun 'environment' needs the definite article 'the' when specified by adjectives 'quiet and peaceful'. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Honestly I haven't in the same school as the Chinese kid so I don't know their behavior but maybe they are often going to the library because the culture of Chinese is love to read.

✓ Honestly, I haven't been in the same school as Chinese kids, so I don't know their behavior, but maybe they often go to the library because Chinese culture loves to read.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and article errors: 'haven't' needs 'been' to complete the verb phrase; 'the Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' without 'the'; 'they are often going' should be 'they often go' for habitual action; 'the culture of Chinese is love to read' should be 'Chinese culture loves to read' for correct noun and verb usage.