Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve sentence structure and article usage. For example, say "I'm keen on reading books, so I spend around one to two hours at the library daily." Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. I usually spend about one to two hours there every day.

제안: Use complete sentences and avoid informal fillers like "and yeah." Also, be more specific about the types of books and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: In the library, I usually borrow books to read. I enjoy genres like self-help and literature because they help me learn and relax.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal phrases like "And yeah." For example, "When I was a child, I didn't like reading books because I found them boring. However, as I grew up, I realized their importance and started to enjoy reading."

예시: When I was a child, I didn't like reading books because I thought they were boring. However, as I grew older, I understood how important reading is, so now I enjoy it.

제안: Try to answer the question politely and briefly, even if it is not about you. For example, you can say, "I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my country, many children go to the library." Avoid asking the examiner to change the question.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Vietnam, many children often visit the library to study and read books.

× I'm keen on reading book, so on daily basis I spend around one to two hours at library.

✓ I'm keen on reading books, so on a daily basis I spend around one to two hours at the library.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which involves multiple books. Also, 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be correct: 'on a daily basis'. Additionally, 'at library' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the place: 'at the library'.

× At the library I always borrow a book and I really like reading my favorite book.

✓ At the library I always borrow books and I really like reading my favorite books.

The phrase 'a book' is singular but the context suggests habitual action, so plural 'books' is more appropriate. Similarly, 'my favorite book' should be plural 'my favorite books' to indicate more than one favorite book.

× Like self health or literature and yeah.

✓ Like self-help or literature and yeah.

The phrase 'self health' is incorrect; the correct term is 'self-help'. This is a fixed expression and should be used as such.

× Actually, when I was a little kid, I didn't like reading book because I thought reading books was boring and not interesting.

✓ Actually, when I was a little kid, I didn't like reading books because I thought reading books was boring and not interesting.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which involves multiple books.

× And when I grow up I realized the importance of reading book.

✓ And when I grew up I realized the importance of reading books.

The phrase 'when I grow up' should be in the past tense 'when I grew up' to match the past tense 'realized'. Also, 'reading book' should be 'reading books' for plural consistency.

× And when I grow up I realized the importance of reading book.

✓ And when I grew up I realized the importance of reading books.

As above, 'reading book' should be plural 'reading books' because it refers to reading in general.