Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repeating the same phrase and make your answer more concise and natural. Also, provide a clearer reason why you don't like the library now, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't often go to the library nowadays because I prefer studying at home. However, when I was in college, I used to visit the library daily since it provided a quiet environment that helped me focus on my studies.

제안: Improve your sentence structure and use more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like "different type of books."

예시: Usually, I study in the library, but when I want a break from studying, I enjoy reading various kinds of books, such as novels and magazines.

제안: Avoid repeating information already mentioned and reduce filler phrases like "to be very honest." Be more specific about the activities you did in the library as a kid and use linking words to organize your answer.

예시: Yes, I did. Besides going to the library daily in college, I also visited it during my school years to participate in reading clubs and complete homework assignments.

제안: Try to answer the question based on general knowledge or assumptions if you lack personal experience. Avoid negative phrases like "I don't have idea" and use more natural expressions.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but generally, many children in China visit libraries to study and read books, especially in urban areas where libraries are more accessible.

× Most of the time I do studies there, but if I don't want to study anything I prefer to read different type of books.

✓ Most of the time I study there, but if I don't want to study anything I prefer to read different types of books.

The word 'studies' is incorrectly used as a plural noun here; the correct form is the verb 'study' to describe the action. Also, 'different type of books' should be pluralized to 'different types of books' because 'types' refers to multiple categories, matching the plural noun 'books'.

× in school times I also went to library for different type of activities.

✓ in school times I also went to the library for different types of activities.

The phrase 'went to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'different type of activities' should be pluralized to 'different types of activities' to correctly indicate multiple categories of activities.

× I never met them, not even ever experienced any type of conversation with them.

✓ I have never met them, nor have I ever experienced any type of conversation with them.

The sentence lacks proper conjunction and verb forms. 'Not even ever experienced' is awkward; it should be 'nor have I ever experienced' to correctly connect the two negative statements. Also, 'any type of conversation' is acceptable here as it refers to a singular type.