Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "No, I seldom go to the library because I can easily access important information on the Internet, which is more convenient and efficient."

예시: No, I seldom go to the library because I can easily access important information on the Internet, which is more convenient and efficient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example: "I usually go to the library to study and get books for my research, especially when preparing for exams, because it is quiet and helps me concentrate."

예시: I usually go to the library to study and get books for my research, especially when preparing for exams, because it is quiet and helps me concentrate.

제안: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example: "Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because the Internet was not available then. We usually went there to study and find important information for exams or research."

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because the Internet was not available then. We usually went there to study and find important information for exams or research.

제안: Try to answer the question more directly and naturally. You can express your opinion or lack of knowledge politely. For example: "I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I was born and raised in the Philippines, so I don't have much information about that."

예시: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I was born and raised in the Philippines, so I don't have much information about that.

× No, I seldom go to the library because I can.

✓ No, I seldom go to the library because I can get information online.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The modal verb 'can' needs an object or complement to make sense. Adding 'get information online' clarifies the meaning and corrects the modal verb usage.

× Nowadays I can get the important information through the Internet and it is accessible and efficient whenever I there's an important information I want to get.

✓ Nowadays I can get important information through the Internet, and it is accessible and efficient whenever there is important information I want to get.

The phrase 'whenever I there's an important information' is incorrect. 'There is' should be used to indicate existence, and 'information' is uncountable, so 'an' should be removed. Correcting these fixes the 'there be' issue and article usage.

× I usually do in the library to get the books I need in my research or in my study.

✓ I usually go to the library to get the books I need for my research or study.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb after 'I usually do'. 'Do' is incomplete here. Replacing it with 'go to the library' corrects the sentence structure.

× I used to. I do usually. I usually do in library to study because it is silent.

✓ I usually study in the library because it is quiet.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a clear sentence with correct word order and replacing 'silent' with 'quiet' improves clarity and correctness.

× I often go to the library when when I was a kid because the Internet is not yet available that time.

✓ I often went to the library when I was a kid because the Internet was not yet available at that time.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past time reference. Changing 'go' to past tense 'went' and 'is' to 'was' aligns the verb tenses with the past time frame.

× Oftentimes we go to the library to study and get the important information we need in preparation for an exam or research.

✓ Oftentimes we go to the library to study and get the important information we need in preparation for exams or research.

'Exam' should be plural 'exams' to match the general context. This corrects the singular and plural issue.

× I could not say that Chinese kids often go to the library.

✓ I cannot say that Chinese kids often go to the library.

'Could not' implies past ability, but the context is present. Using 'cannot' correctly expresses present inability to say.