Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but quite brief and could be more natural and effective by adding specific details and linking words. Try to explain why you go to the library or what you do there to enrich your response.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library in my free time because I enjoy reading different kinds of books and it helps me relax after a busy day.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit simple and repetitive. To improve, use linking words and provide more specific details about the types of books or why you find them interesting.

예시: I usually read books in the library, especially novels and history books, because I find them very interesting and informative.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use the past tense correctly and explain more clearly why you went to the library as a child, with specific reasons and linking words.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because reading books helped me learn new things and set goals for my future.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide reasons or examples to support your view.

예시: In my opinion, many Chinese kids do go to the library because it is a good place for studying and finding useful information.

× Yes, I go to the library when I was kid because little books are very important in our life and in our life goals.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because little books are very important in our life and in our life goals.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past time reference 'when I was kid'. The verb should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'a kid' needs the article 'a' before 'kid'.

× Yes, I go to the library when I was kid because little books are very important in our life and in our life goals.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because little books are very important in our life and in our life goals.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the definite article 'a' before 'kid'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. So, it should be 'a kid'.

× I do not have any opinion on the Chinese kids go to the library.

✓ I do not have any opinion on whether Chinese kids go to the library.

The original sentence lacks proper structure after 'opinion on'. It needs a clause starting with 'whether' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'the Chinese kids' is too specific; 'Chinese kids' is more general and appropriate here.

× I don't think a Chinese kids go to the library.

✓ I don't think Chinese kids go to the library.

The phrase 'a Chinese kids' incorrectly mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'kids'. It should be either 'a Chinese kid' (singular) or 'Chinese kids' (plural). Here, plural is intended, so remove 'a'.