Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "borrow without buying book", bạn có thể nói "borrow books for free". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can borrow books for free. Also, I find it easier to concentrate on reading there.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "borrow in the book", bạn nên nói "borrow books". Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually borrow books and read them there. I also research information related to the books to learn more.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ "because" nhiều lần. Hãy sắp xếp ý tưởng logic và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I couldn't go there alone. Also, I thought the library was not suitable for children my age.

제안: Bạn nên tránh những nhận xét chung chung và không chính xác như "all the people are very smart". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "a education country" nên là "an educational country".

예시: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in China, and libraries provide useful resources for their studies.

× I often go to the library because it is a quiet environment where I can borrow without buying book and in that place I can focus to reading book.

✓ I often go to the library because it is a quiet environment where I can borrow books without buying them and in that place I can focus on reading books.

The phrase 'borrow without buying book' is incorrect because 'book' should be plural 'books' and 'borrow without buying' needs an object. Also, 'focus to reading book' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'focus on reading books'. The sentence needs plural forms and correct prepositions for clarity.

× When I go to the library, I usually borrow in the book and reading books.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually borrow books and read books.

The phrase 'borrow in the book' is incorrect; 'borrow' is a transitive verb and should be followed directly by the object without a preposition. Also, 'reading books' should be 'read books' to match the verb tense and parallel structure.

× Then I can research the information about the book. This one.

✓ Then I can research information about the book.

The phrase 'This one' is unnecessary and unclear. Also, 'the information' can be simplified to 'information' for naturalness. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundant words.

× I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because the first reason because I'm a kid and I can't go to the library alone and the second reason is library is not good for my age when I am a kid.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because, first, I was a kid and couldn't go to the library alone, and second, the library was not suitable for my age when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I'm a kid' and 'I can't go' should be in past tense to match 'didn't go'. Also, 'library is not good for my age' is awkward; 'was not suitable for my age' is better. The sentence is long and needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because that is a education country and all the people in that country are very smart.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because it is an educational country and all the people in that country are very smart.

The phrase 'that is a education country' is incorrect; it should be 'it is an educational country'. 'Education' is a noun, but here an adjective 'educational' is needed. Also, 'that' should be 'it' to refer to the country properly.