Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác, ví dụ như 'enjoy go' nên là 'enjoy going'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp lại các cụm từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'projects' và 'friend' nên là 'friends').

예시: Yes, I really enjoy going to the library. I usually spend my time reading books, working on projects, and chatting with my friends.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'I feel I feel' và chú ý ngữ pháp như 'ability to building' nên là 'ability to build'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy dùng số nhiều đúng cách (skills, people).

예시: I usually spend time reading books, working on projects, and having conversations with my friends. Moreover, I think the library is a great environment to improve my communication skills and build relationships with others.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'I usually go' nên là 'I usually went', 'a reading book' nên là 'reading books'. Ngoài ra, phần cuối câu không rõ nghĩa ('musician readership'). Bạn nên tập trung trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng thì quá khứ đúng cách.

예시: Yes, I usually went to the library when I was a child because I loved reading books. It was a place where I could relax and enjoy my hobby. Sometimes, I also invited my friends to join me there.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với các ý cụ thể và mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they prefer a quiet place to relax and learn new things from books.

× Yes, I really enjoy go to the library.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy going to the library.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'go' should be corrected to 'going'.

× I usually spend time on reading books, working on the projects and having a conversation with my friend.

✓ I usually spend time reading books, working on projects and having conversations with my friends.

The phrase 'spend time on' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time' followed directly by the verb in '-ing' form. Also, 'the projects' should be 'projects' (no article), and 'a conversation with my friend' should be plural 'conversations with my friends' to match general usage.

× I usually spend time on reading books, working on the project and having a conversation with my friends.

✓ I usually spend time reading books, working on projects and having conversations with my friends.

Same as above: 'spend time on' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time' plus verb '-ing'. Also, 'the project' should be 'projects' to be consistent and plural, and 'having a conversation' should be plural 'conversations'.

× I feel I feel the library is a good environment to improve my communication skill and my ability to building a relationship with another people.

✓ I feel the library is a good environment to improve my communication skills and my ability to build relationships with other people.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to refer generally. 'Ability to building' is incorrect; it should be 'ability to build' (infinitive form). 'Another people' is incorrect; it should be 'other people'.

× Yes, I usually go to the library when I when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the library when I was a child.

The action refers to the past, so 'go' should be in past tense 'went'. Also, the repeated phrase 'when I' is redundant and removed.

× When I was a kid, my hobby was a reading book.

✓ When I was a kid, my hobby was reading books.

'A reading book' is incorrect; 'reading books' is the correct expression to describe the hobby.

× My hobby was reading a book.

✓ My hobby was reading books.

Using 'a book' implies a single book, but as a hobby, it is more natural to say 'reading books'.

× So I usually come to the library to relax and I'm reading book.

✓ So I usually come to the library to relax and read books.

'I'm reading book' is incorrect here; it should be 'read books' to match the simple present tense and plural form.

× Not only reading book, I also invite my friend to musician readership.

✓ Not only reading books, I also invite my friends to music sessions.

'Reading book' should be plural 'reading books'. 'Invite my friend to musician readership' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended meaning is inviting friends to music-related activities, so 'music sessions' is a better phrase.

× Sure challenge his preferred to the peaceful white library so they need to fee they need to feed the peaceful Black Library to relax and explore new a new knowledge by the book.

✓ Sure, children prefer the peaceful quiet library because they need to feel the peaceful library to relax and explore new knowledge through books.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. 'Challenge his preferred' is incorrect; likely meant 'children prefer'. 'White library' and 'Black Library' are likely errors for 'quiet library' or 'peaceful library'. 'Fee' and 'feed' are incorrect; should be 'feel'. 'New a new knowledge' is redundant; 'new knowledge' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity.