Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复和断断续续的语句。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment and a wide range of books that help me study effectively.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达自己的活动内容，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: Usually, I do my homework in the library and sometimes discuss assignments with my teammates online rather than face to face.

제안: 回答缺乏完整性和连贯性，句子断断续续。建议练习用完整句子描述过去的经历，并增加细节使内容丰富。

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library regularly when I was in middle school, often with my family and brother. I really enjoyed reading books there.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和逻辑混乱。建议用完整句子说明原因，并举例说明中国孩子去图书馆的情况。

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because studying is very important in China. They usually visit the library to complete their homework and improve their skills.

× Yes, after being a university student.

✓ Yes, since becoming a university student.

这里应该使用现在完成时态表达从过去某时开始持续到现在的状态，原句中使用了不正确的时态表达。

× It's more. It's more usual for. For us to study in the library, because there are so many books that we can.

✓ It is more usual for us to study in the library because there are so many books available.

原句断句不完整，语序混乱，导致句子结构错误，应将句子连贯完整表达。

× In that case, I always. Do doing my homework in the library or.

✓ In that case, I always do my homework in the library or

动词后不应加doing，正确用法是动词原形do，后接宾语。

× To. Discuss something with my teammate in computer.

✓ to discuss something with my teammate on the computer.

介词使用错误，应该用on the computer表示在电脑上。

× Not face to face.

✓ not face to face.

句子不完整，应与前句连贯，表达完整意思。

× Yes, I went to the library from. From when I was a. When I was a middle school student, I always, I always went to there with my family, with my brother, especially and.

✓ Yes, I went to the library from when I was a middle school student. I always went there with my family, especially with my brother.

句子断裂且重复，应合并并调整时态和语序，使句子通顺。

× I always went to there with my family, with my brother, especially and.

✓ I always went there with my family, especially with my brother.

介词to和there不能连用，应直接用went there。

× I always like.

✓ I always liked it.

句子缺少宾语，like后应有宾语，且时态应与上下文一致。

× Because study is so important for every Chinese student, Chinese kids.

✓ Because studying is so important for every Chinese student and Chinese kid.

study应改为动名词studying，kids应与every Chinese student保持一致，改为kid。

× It's always. The connect is always connected to their schools and skills in the schools because they have many homework to do.

✓ It is always connected to their schools and skills because they have a lot of homework to do.

句子中the connect用法错误，应改为it is connected；homework是不可数名词，前面应加a lot of。