Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar by saying "I am a regular visitor to the library near my home." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library near my home because I am an avid reader and enjoy exploring new books.

제안: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer phrases. Also, explain why the quiet ambience is beneficial. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Usually, I borrow and return books at the library. However, sometimes I prefer to read there because the quiet and relaxing ambience helps me concentrate and improve my listening skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammar errors. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to show contrast between past and present preferences. Also, complete your last sentence for clarity.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child and enjoyed reading children's magazines for entertainment. However, nowadays I prefer more serious books to improve my vocabulary and knowledge.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid vague phrases like "Aside on a Chinese citizen." Use clearer sentences and linking words to express your opinion logically. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Although I am not Chinese, I noticed during my visit to China that there are many libraries and bookshelves, even in supermarkets. This shows that Chinese people encourage children to develop a strong reading habit, which I think is very positive.

× I'm a regular visitor of library that is nearby my location.

✓ I'm a regular visitor to the library that is near my location.

The correct preposition to use with 'visitor' is 'to', not 'of'. Also, 'nearby' is an adjective or adverb, but here 'near' is more appropriate before 'my location'. So, 'visitor to the library that is near my location' is correct.

× Borrowing and returning by the book is my regular practice in library, but sometimes I like to prefer library as a reading location because it's provide a quiet and relaxing ambience that you can improve our listening skill.

✓ Borrowing and returning books is my regular practice in the library, but sometimes I prefer the library as a reading location because it provides a quiet and relaxing ambience where you can improve your listening skills.

The phrase 'borrowing and returning by the book' is incorrect; it should be 'borrowing and returning books'. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone suffices. 'It's provide' should be 'it provides' to agree with the singular subject. 'You can improve our listening skill' mixes pronouns; it should be 'you can improve your listening skills'.

× I used to go to library when I was a kid, but at that time I used to prefer kid magazine or books related to kids Kids that is.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was a kid, but at that time I used to prefer kids' magazines or books related to kids.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Kid magazine' should be plural and possessive as 'kids' magazines' to indicate magazines for children. The phrase 'Kids that is' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× Aside on a Chinese citizen, I don't know more about that but when I visit China, I found that there are a lot of libraries are there and there is lot of books shelf.

✓ Aside from being a Chinese citizen, I don't know much about that, but when I visited China, I found that there are a lot of libraries and many bookshelves there.

The phrase 'Aside on a Chinese citizen' is incorrect; it should be 'Aside from being a Chinese citizen'. 'I don't know more about that' should be 'I don't know much about that'. 'When I visit China' should be past tense 'visited' to match the past context. 'There are a lot of libraries are there' is redundant; 'there are a lot of libraries' suffices. 'There is lot of books shelf' should be 'there are many bookshelves'.

× There is in every supermarket.

✓ There is one in every supermarket.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'one' clarifies what is present in every supermarket.

× That shows their passion towards reading and the Chinese people are reinforcing reading habit to kids and kids are always like to read books I think.

✓ That shows their passion for reading, and the Chinese people are reinforcing the reading habit among kids, who always like to read books, I think.

The phrase 'passion towards' should be 'passion for'. 'Reinforcing reading habit to kids' should be 'reinforcing the reading habit among kids'. 'Kids are always like to read books' is incorrect; it should be 'kids always like to read books'. Adding commas improves clarity.