Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and natural flow. Try to avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases like 'OK, thank you so much' which are not needed in your answer. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to explore books on geography, history, and religion. These books help me learn new things and keep my mind active and strong.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing parts. Avoid repeating phrases and unrelated words. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples using linking words. Keep your answer focused and coherent.

예시: In the library, I usually read books about geography. For example, I learn about Nepal's mountainous terrain and how it differs from other countries.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear reason and support it with examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: When I was a child, I usually did not go to the library because I preferred playing with my friends. Most children enjoy exploring and playing rather than studying at that age.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains inappropriate and irrelevant content. Avoid making unsupported statements or irrelevant comments. If you don't know the answer, say so politely. Keep your answer respectful and relevant to the question.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many children around the world visit libraries to study and read books.

× I usually go to the library for exploring different types of books related to geography, history, like religious.

✓ I usually go to the library to explore different types of books related to geography, history, and religion.

The phrase 'for exploring' is incorrect here; after 'go to the library', the infinitive form 'to explore' should be used to express purpose. Using 'for' followed by a gerund is not appropriate in this context.

× With the with the help of book we can explore many things, many things which helps us to stay very mentally strong.

✓ With the help of books, we can explore many things, many things which help us to stay very mentally strong.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'many things'.

× I usually read geographical books in the library for which helps me to know about the different geographical conditions of different country.

✓ I usually read geographical books in the library, which helps me to learn about the different geographical conditions of different countries.

The phrase 'for which helps' is incorrect; 'which helps' is the correct relative clause. Also, 'know' is better replaced by 'learn' in this context. 'Country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'different'.

× Different country.

✓ Different countries.

The noun 'country' should be plural 'countries' because it refers to more than one country.

× When I was killed, I usually don't go to the library because I wasn't into them.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually didn't go to the library because I wasn't into it.

'Was killed' is incorrect; it should be 'was a kid' to indicate childhood. Also, 'don't' should be past tense 'didn't' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Them' should be 'it' referring to the library.

× I was fond of playing with my friends, exploring different types of things because everyone in everyone in childhood, they don't have any intensity.

✓ I was fond of playing with my friends and exploring different types of things because everyone in childhood doesn't have much intensity.

The phrase 'everyone in everyone in childhood' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Don't have any intensity' should be 'doesn't have much intensity' to agree with singular 'everyone' and to use appropriate quantifier.

× I didn't know because I am from Nepal. I know about the Nepalese people because Chinese kids are always.

✓ I don't know because I am from Nepal. I know about Nepalese people, but I am not sure about Chinese kids.

The sentence is incomplete and confusing. 'I didn't know' should be 'I don't know' to express present uncertainty. The pronoun usage and sentence structure need correction for clarity.

× I think Chinese kids also go to the library went to the library because Chinese gets its monkey dog there.

✓ I think Chinese kids also go to the library because Chinese people keep monkeys and dogs there.

The phrase 'go to the library went to the library' is redundant and incorrect. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× The meat of the dog Buffalo like and and produce different type of virus like coronavirus, COVID and which which kill our nation whole mission by.

✓ The meat of dogs and buffaloes can produce different types of viruses like coronavirus, COVID, which have affected our entire nation.

The pronouns and nouns are misused and unclear. 'Dog Buffalo like' is incorrect; it should be 'dogs and buffaloes'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.