Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas like 'no disturbance' and 'no disruption' in the same sentence. Also, try to use correct verb forms and more varied vocabulary. For example, instead of 'I visit the library mostly, like once in a week,' say 'I usually visit the library once a week.'

예시: Yes, I usually visit the library once a week because it provides a quiet environment where I can concentrate on my studies without distractions.

제안: Your answer has good content but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Usually I sit in the library reading books or novels, but most of the time I was doing my assignments,' say 'I usually read books or novels in the library, but most of the time I do my school or college assignments there because it is peaceful and free from disturbances.'

예시: I usually read books or novels in the library, but most of the time I do my school or college assignments there because it is peaceful and free from disturbances.

제안: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and correct verb tenses. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific. For example, instead of 'I use it to visit a library with my parents,' say 'I used to visit the library with my parents when I was a child.' Also, correct 'nobles' to 'novels.'

예시: I used to visit the library with my parents when I was a child because they are both teachers. Going there regularly helped me develop a habit of reading novels and stories.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'So I don't know.' For example, say 'Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it helps them improve their studies and develop good reading habits.'

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it helps them improve their studies and develop good reading habits.

× I go over there 'cause it give me a proper place to study

✓ I go over there 'cause it gives me a proper place to study

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× but most of the time I was doing my assignments or my work from my school or my college.

✓ but most of the time I do my assignments or my work from my school or my college.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'do' is appropriate instead of the past continuous 'was doing'. Using present tense indicates regular activities.

× I would choose the library 'cause it's a peaceful place and there's no one to disturb.

✓ I choose the library 'cause it's a peaceful place and there's no one to disturb.

The modal verb 'would' suggests a conditional or hypothetical situation, but here the speaker is stating a habitual fact, so the simple present 'choose' is correct.

× I use it to visit a library with my parents as my parents both are in teaching profession so they use it to visit the library once or twice every week.

✓ I used to visit a library with my parents as my parents both are in the teaching profession so they used to visit the library once or twice every week.

The phrase 'used to' is appropriate for past habitual actions. Also, 'use it to visit' is incorrect; it should be 'used to visit'. The present tense 'are' is correct for the parents' profession as it is still true.

× from that I got the habit of reading the nobles or the stories.

✓ from that I got the habit of reading the novels or the stories.

The word 'nobles' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'novels' which means books of fiction. This is a vocabulary correction related to singular/plural confusion.

× Yes, I think child needs kids visit or go often to the library 'cause we have always seen that they are good in studies.

✓ Yes, I think children need to visit or go often to the library 'cause we have always seen that they are good in studies.

The singular 'child' is incorrect when referring to multiple kids; the plural 'children' should be used. Also, 'needs kids visit' is ungrammatical; it should be 'need to visit'. This corrects number agreement and verb form.