Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In your answer, try to be more clear and natural. Avoid unclear phrases like 'starting my aisles, books' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often go to the university library, which is located on the second floor of the Bill University building. I usually go there to study and read books related to my courses. The quiet environment helps me concentrate better on my studies.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more specific about what you study.

예시: Usually, I read textbooks related to my university courses. Sometimes, I also study Cambridge books to prepare for the IELTS exam. The quiet atmosphere in the library helps me stay focused and confident while studying.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to use correct past tense and complete your ideas. Also, explain clearly why you did not go to the library as a child.

예시: Actually, I never went to the library when I was a child because I did not understand its importance. Also, I come from a village where there was no library available.

제안: Try to avoid hesitation words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your sentences. Also, be careful with subject-verb agreement and plural forms.

예시: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I am not from China. However, in my country Bangladesh, children usually go to the library to study and do their homework.

× Yes, I often go to the library, especially in my university library, which is in the second floor of the Bill University building.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library, especially my university library, which is on the second floor of the Bill University building.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'second floor'; the correct preposition is 'on' because floors are considered surfaces or levels. Also, 'especially in my university library' should be 'especially my university library' for natural phrasing.

× I go there for starting my aisles, books and it is the place where I can concentrate in my studies and.

✓ I go there to start my assignments and read books, and it is the place where I can concentrate on my studies.

The phrase 'for starting my aisles, books' is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Aisles' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'assignments'. Also, 'concentrate in my studies' should be 'concentrate on my studies' due to correct preposition usage.

× I'll usually read books of my courses of universities and sometimes I read the Cambridge books for preparing the IELTS examination and the atmosphere of the library makes me very confident and attentive to study.

✓ I usually read books for my university courses, and sometimes I read Cambridge books to prepare for the IELTS examination. The atmosphere of the library makes me very confident and attentive when I study.

'I'll usually read' is incorrect; 'I usually read' is appropriate for habitual actions. 'Books of my courses of universities' is awkward; 'books for my university courses' is clearer. 'For preparing' should be 'to prepare for' to correctly express purpose. Also, 'attentive to study' should be 'attentive when I study' for clarity.

× Truly in my childhood I never gone to the library because I didn't know the importance of the library and as I am read as I am in from a village so there are no library for the.

✓ Truly, in my childhood, I never went to the library because I didn't know the importance of the library. Also, since I am from a village, there was no library there.

'Never gone' is incorrect; the past tense of 'go' is 'went'. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear; it needs to be split and rephrased for clarity. 'There are no library for the' is incomplete and should be 'there was no library there'.

× Uh, I hope so but I'm not actually sure because I'm not belong to China so I don't know that Chinese kids are going to library or not.

✓ Uh, I hope so, but I'm not actually sure because I don't belong to China, so I don't know whether Chinese kids go to the library or not.

'I'm not belong' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't belong'. 'Are going to library' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go to the library'. Also, 'whether' is needed to introduce the indirect question properly.

× But in my country Bangladesh, children's are usually go to library for studying their.

✓ But in my country Bangladesh, children usually go to the library to study.

'Children's' is possessive and incorrect here; the plural noun 'children' is correct. 'Are usually go' is incorrect; it should be 'usually go'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'For studying their' is incomplete and should be 'to study'.