Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is near my house. I enjoy reading there and sometimes I buy or borrow books. It is a quiet place that helps me focus on my studies.

제안: Avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Provide more specific details about your preferences to enrich your response.

예시: When I visit the library, I usually browse the titles on the shelves to find interesting books. I especially enjoy reading novels and academic journals because they help me learn new things.

제안: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. Try to express your memories in a clear and structured way.

예시: Yes, when I was 12, I went to the library with my father. He taught me how to choose the right books and explained the library rules, such as being quiet and how to find books on the shelves.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide more specific information about the topic.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often visit libraries. I watched a documentary about children in China and Korea, and it showed that many of them regularly go to libraries to study and read books.

× Sometime yes, I go to to the library.

✓ Sometimes yes, I go to the library.

The word 'Sometime' should be plural 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the repeated 'to' is a typographical error. Use 'Sometimes' to express occasional action.

× I like to go to read and buy some books and sometimes I borrow some books from them.

✓ I like to go to read and buy some books, and sometimes I borrow some books from there.

The phrase 'borrow some books from them' is incorrect because 'them' refers to people, but the intended meaning is borrowing from the library, a place. Use 'there' to refer to a place.

× Actually, when I go to the library, I spend some time to to browsing the title of the books in the shelves so I can know what I want to borrow.

✓ Actually, when I go to the library, I spend some time browsing the titles of the books on the shelves so I can know what I want to borrow.

The phrase 'spend some time to to browsing' is incorrect; 'spend time' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'title' should be plural 'titles' because there are multiple books. The preposition 'in the shelves' should be 'on the shelves' because books are placed on shelves.

× And I like, I like novels and and journals.

✓ And I like, I like novels and journals.

The repeated word 'and' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× Yes, I remember I go to the library when I was 12 with my father and I read and he teach me how to choose the book, the right book to read it and how and the rules of the libraries.

✓ Yes, I remember I went to the library when I was 12 with my father and I read, and he taught me how to choose the book, the right book to read, and the rules of the library.

The verbs 'go' and 'teach' should be in the past tense 'went' and 'taught' to match the past time frame. Also, 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to refer to the specific place.

× I should be quiet where from where I can get the book and what I should do.

✓ I should be quiet, know where I can get the book, and what I should do.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. It should be rephrased to clearly express the ideas: being quiet, knowing where to get the book, and understanding what to do.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because I see a document, a video about Chinese and Korean I think and and all of their children go to the library and I really enjoy watching this document because it give me much information.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because I saw a documentary, a video about Chinese and Korean children, I think, and all of their children go to the library. I really enjoy watching this documentary because it gives me much information.

The word 'document' should be 'documentary' to correctly describe the video. The verb 'see' should be past tense 'saw' to match the past event. The phrase 'it give me' should be 'it gives me' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, repeated 'and' is a typographical error and should be removed.