Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually go to the library two or three times a week because my home is near the city center, which is noisy and crowded. Therefore, I prefer the quiet environment of the library to focus on studying and preparing presentations.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng các câu ngắn rời rạc và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'team members' thay vì 'team member').

예시: In the library, I usually borrow different kinds of books, including scientific books and comics. Also, I often meet my team members there to work on assignments and presentations before the deadlines.

제안: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: 'as as a child'). Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I was a book lover when I was a child. I considered reading a relaxing activity that made me feel comfortable. I especially loved reading fairy tales and comic books.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'Chinese kiss' thay vì 'Chinese kids'). Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác.

예시: To be honest, I am not sure about how often Chinese children go to the library. However, from what I have seen on TV and in the news, it seems that many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly.

× I'm going to the library regularly, about twice or three times a week because my home is near the city center and it is really crowded and noisy for me and I can't focus on studying and doing my presentation so that I prefer to go to the library.

✓ I go to the library regularly, about two or three times a week because my home is near the city center and it is really crowded and noisy for me, so I can't focus on studying and doing my presentation, so I prefer to go to the library.

The phrase 'I'm going to the library regularly' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense for a habitual action. Habitual actions should use the simple present tense, so 'I go' is correct. Also, 'about twice or three times' should be 'about two or three times' for correct quantifier usage.

× I can borrow many kinds of books such as scientific books and even comic.

✓ I can borrow many kinds of books such as scientific books and even comics.

The word 'comic' should be plural 'comics' when referring to comic books in general. This is a quantifier and noun agreement issue.

× And also I often go to the library to meet my team member to do the assignments and presentation before the deadline.

✓ Also, I often go to the library to meet my team members to do the assignments and presentations before the deadline.

The singular 'team member' should be plural 'team members' because it is likely referring to multiple people. Also, 'assignments and presentation' should be plural 'assignments and presentations' for consistency.

× At that time, I consider reading as a recreational activity for me to relax and make me comfortable.

✓ At that time, I considered reading as a recreational activity to help me relax and feel comfortable.

The verb 'consider' should be in the past tense 'considered' to match the past time frame 'at that time'. Also, 'make me comfortable' is better expressed as 'feel comfortable'.

× Moreover, as as a child, I really love to read fairy tale and comic books.

✓ Moreover, as a child, I really loved to read fairy tales and comic books.

The phrase 'as as a child' has a repeated word 'as'. Also, 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match the past context. 'Fairy tale' should be plural 'fairy tales'.

× To be honest, other Vietnamese kid, I don't know clearly about how regular children in China going to the library, but when I watch the TV or watching the news, I saw that Chinese kiss of going to the library a lot.

✓ To be honest, other than Vietnamese kids, I don't know clearly how regularly children in China go to the library, but when I watch TV or watch the news, I see that Chinese kids go to the library a lot.

The phrase 'other Vietnamese kid' should be 'other than Vietnamese kids'. 'How regular children in China going' should be 'how regularly children in China go'. 'Watch the TV or watching the news' should be consistent tense: 'watch TV or watch the news'. 'Chinese kiss' is a typo and should be 'Chinese kids'. 'I saw' should be present tense 'I see' to match the ongoing observation.