List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并且注意时态和词汇的准确使用。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述购物时列清单的习惯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need. I find it quite enjoyable to plan my purchases in advance.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显简单，建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节说明清单如何帮助工作安排。

예시: Yes, I write a list for my work every day because it helps me prioritize tasks. As a result, I can manage my time efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化表达并使用连接词，使观点更清晰。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to have the freedom to do things spontaneously instead of following a fixed plan.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子不完整且有语法错误，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免口语化表达。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone often distracts me with apps like TikTok, which interrupts my focus and makes it hard to finish the list.

× I love to make at least the process actually it's a very fun thing for me to do.

✓ I love to make at least the process; actually, it's a very fun thing for me to do.

原句中缺少分号或句号，导致句子结构混乱。应使用分号或句号分隔两个独立分句，使句子更清晰。

× I will try my hard to think what I need the most.

✓ I will try my hardest to think about what I need the most.

短语应为“try my hardest”，表示尽最大努力；同时，动词后应加介词“about”引出宾语。

× It makes me very clear of what I should do and I can arrange my schedule more clearly.

✓ It makes me very clear what I should do, and I can arrange my schedule more clearly.

短语“make someone clear”后不接介词“of”，应直接跟宾语从句。

× Because they feel they are stuck, you know, they feel that that's the only thing I can do for today.

✓ Because they feel they are stuck, you know, they feel that that's the only thing they can do for today.

句中主语为“they”，后文不应突然变为“I”，应保持代词一致。

× And they don't like it feeling they want to be free and do things randomly.

✓ And they don't like it, feeling they want to be free and do things randomly.

原句缺少逗号，导致句意不清。加逗号后，“feeling”作为现在分词短语修饰前面的内容，使句子更通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because when I make a list on my phone I will be distracted to Tiktok or anything like that so I can't manage to finish making the list or I will.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I make a list on my phone, I will be distracted by TikTok or anything like that, so I can't manage to finish making the list.

动词“distracted”后应接介词“by”表示被什么分散注意力；另外，句中“or I will”不完整，应删除。