List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法和用词有些错误，例如“category”应为“categorize”，句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, I often make a list when I shop to make sure I don't forget anything. Also, I usually categorize my list to save time and complete my shopping efficiently.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但连接词使用不够自然，如“And also”可以用“Moreover”或“Besides”。建议使用更自然的连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often make a list for my work because I find it very useful. First, I categorize my tasks into different groups to avoid forgetting anything. Moreover, I use an app to keep track of all my work efficiently.

제안: 句子结构不够自然，表达不够准确，如“there are enough confidence”应为“they have enough confidence”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists for a couple of reasons. First, they have enough confidence in their memory to remember everything. Second, they feel that making a list is troublesome and time-consuming.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子衔接不够自然，如“And then”可用“Besides”或“Furthermore”。建议使用更自然的连接词和简洁表达。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient to check it anytime. Besides, there are many useful apps that help me keep track of everything I want to buy.

× Besides, I often category my list to save time to finish all the buying.

✓ Besides, I often categorize my list to save time finishing all the buying.

这里 'category' 是动词，应该用动词的正确形式 'categorize'。另外，'to finish all the buying' 改为 'finishing all the buying' 更符合表达习惯。

× And also I use some app to keep track of all the work.

✓ And also I use some apps to keep track of all the work.

'app' 是可数名词，表示多个应用程序时应使用复数形式 'apps'。

× I think some people do not like making lists for this below in reasons.

✓ I think some people do not like making lists for the following reasons.

表达 '以下原因' 应使用 'the following reasons'，'this below in reasons' 结构不正确。

× First, there are enough confidence of their memory that they can remember everything.

✓ First, they have enough confidence in their memory that they can remember everything.

'confidence' 是不可数名词，不能用 'are'，应使用 'have'。同时，'confidence of their memory' 应改为 'confidence in their memory'。

× Second, they think making a list bring them a lot of trouble.

✓ Second, they think making a list brings them a lot of trouble.

主语是单数 'making a list'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'brings'。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone than on a paper because it's more convenient for me to take a phone out to check on the list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient for me to take my phone out to check the list.

'a paper' 应改为不可数名词 'paper'，'take a phone out' 应改为 'take my phone out'，更符合表达习惯。

× And then I think there are many useful apps which can help me to keep track of all the things I want to buy.

✓ And then I think there are many useful apps that can help me keep track of all the things I want to buy.

'help me to keep' 中 'to' 可省略，'which' 改为 'that' 更常用且自然。