List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语言重复和表达不够自然的问题。建议避免重复词汇，如“use use”，并使用更地道的表达方式。此外，句子结构可以更简洁，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves money.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且存在重复词汇“to to”。建议注意时态一致性，使用现在时描述习惯性动作。同时，句子可以更流畅自然。

예시: I often make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks and use my time efficiently.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“make make”，且表达略显口语化和不够连贯。建议使用更正式的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming, or they prefer to keep their plans in mind rather than writing them down.

제안: 回答中语序混乱，句子不完整，影响理解。建议注意句子结构，确保主谓宾完整，并避免语序错误。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I can carry it everywhere and quickly type what I need to do instead of writing on paper.

× Sure, I often make a list when shopping.

✓ Sure, I often make a list when I am shopping.

动词短语中缺少主语和be动词，应该使用完整的现在进行时结构“when I am shopping”，使句子完整且语法正确。

× And it really helps me to save money and use use my money at the last degree.

✓ And it really helps me to save money and use my money to the greatest extent.

“use use”重复错误，应删除一个“use”；“at the last degree”表达不地道，应该用“to the greatest extent”表示最大程度。

× I often made a working list when I'm going to do something.

✓ I often make a working list when I'm going to do something.

句子中“often”表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时“make”，而不是过去时“made”。

× It helps me to to make sure what I need to do and make use of the time.

✓ It helps me to make sure what I need to do and make use of the time.

“to to”重复，应删除一个“to”。

× Maybe for some people making A to do list is a waste of time, or they may have a plan in their brain every day so they don't have to make make A to do list every day.

✓ Maybe for some people making a to-do list is a waste of time, or they may have a plan in their brain every day so they don't have to make a to-do list every day.

“A to do list”中“a”应小写且“to do list”应连字符为“to-do list”；“make make”重复，应删除一个“make”。

× I prefer to make a list on my because. It is more convenient phone, I can take it everywhere I go and type the things I need to do easily rather than writing on the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I can take it everywhere I go and type the things I need to do easily rather than writing on paper.

原句中“on my because”词序错误，应为“on my phone because”；“It is more convenient phone”缺少连词且词序错误，应拆分为两句；“writing on the paper”中“the”多余，应为“writing on paper”。