List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文章を作る練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

제안: 回答が断片的で意味が通じにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my studies. It helps me concentrate and organize my tasks effectively.

제안: 内容が不明瞭で、理由を明確に述べられていません。理由を簡潔に述べ、具体的な説明を加える練習をしましょう。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel it takes too much time.

제안: 回答は部分的に理解できますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、理由の説明が不十分です。理由を明確にし、文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

예시: I usually prefer to make a list on paper because when I use my smartphone, I get distracted by apps like Instagram and YouTube.

× My. Characteristic is. Come. Uncle's house. I'm so sorry. Saw. Aye.

✓ My characteristic is that I come to my uncle's house.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. It should be combined into a complete sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× My work is. Student SO. Aye. Study. So I I saw when nice study. I make it. Uhm. It is concentrate on.

✓ My work is studying. So I make a list to help me concentrate.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into coherent sentences that express the idea of making a list to help with studying concentration.

× This is because other people. Usually cannot. Act. That. They make. Wrist so they can assault they. Uh.

✓ This is because other people usually cannot act as if they make a list, so they can forget things.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be rephrased into a complete sentence explaining why some people do not like making lists.

× I usually use. On paper, this is because if I. You is smart phone. I may. Use smartphone apps such as Instagram and YouTube.

✓ I usually use paper because if I use a smartphone, I may get distracted by apps such as Instagram and YouTube.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear pronoun usage. It should be combined into a clear sentence explaining the preference for paper lists over phone lists due to potential distractions.