List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意动词时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免重复和不完整的句子。可以尝试用简单完整的句子表达购物时列清单的习惯。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping. I write down the items I need to buy, such as books and clothes, to make sure I don't forget anything.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议练习使用正确的时态和完整句子，清晰表达制作工作清单的时间和效果。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work. I usually prepare it in the morning to plan my tasks for the day, and in the afternoon, I check what I have completed.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法和词汇使用不准确，影响理解。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚说明原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe that situations often change, so their plans become useless and they prefer to be flexible.

제안: 回答非常不连贯，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子清楚说明偏好和原因。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can check them anytime. However, sometimes I write on paper because I like to tick off completed tasks.

× Yes, I always making making a list before I shop.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I shop.

这里动词 'make' 应该用原形，因为 'always' 后面需要用一般现在时的动词形式，不能用动名词 'making'。

× I will writing what I will buy.

✓ I will write what I will buy.

'will' 后面应该接动词原形，不能用现在分词 'writing'。

× Like the books? Close in some others.

✓ Like books? Close and some others.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，建议简化表达。

× Yes, I always making less to for my work.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work.

'always' 后面动词应为原形 'make'，且 'less to' 语法错误，应为 'lists'。

× I will making list in the morning for my holiday schedule and I will in in the afternoon.

✓ I will make a list in the morning for my holiday schedule and I will work in the afternoon.

'will' 后应接动词原形 'make'，句子中 'I will in in the afternoon' 不完整，补充谓语。

× I will check what I do today and.

✓ I will check what I did today.

句子不完整，且时态应为过去时 'did'，因为是回顾当天的事情。

× And how finished it extend?

✓ And how to finish it on time?

句子结构错误，表达不清，建议改为完整且通顺的句子。

× Uh, some people don't like making lists because they think situations and the conditions often change her so their planes mind become a useless so they will change their ideas as the situation change.

✓ Uh, some people don't like making lists because they think situations and conditions often change, so their plans may become useless and they will change their ideas as the situation changes.

代词使用错误，'her' 应为 'they'，'planes mind' 应为 'plans', 句子缺少连词，时态不一致。

× I like. Making this to eat my phone because.

✓ I like making lists on my phone because

动词 'making' 用法正确，但句子断裂，需补充完整。

× I can. Reading mindless to every every time.

✓ I can read my list every time.

'Reading mindless to every every time' 语法错误，'read' 应用动词原形，'mindless' 用法错误。

× But if if a paper if writing a paper, I will. Ticket. I think.

✓ But if I write on paper, I will tick it, I think.

句子结构混乱，重复 'if'，缺少主语和谓语，需调整顺序使句子通顺。