List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid forgetting anything, especially for special events. Additionally, I create to-do lists to organize my work more effectively.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work, and they really help me avoid forgetting tasks. Moreover, they allow me to organize my work better and manage my time efficiently.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và liên từ để làm rõ ý.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be flexible and respond spontaneously to different situations instead of following a fixed plan.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi nhỏ về số nhiều và đại từ.

예시: Definitely, I prefer making lists on my phone because nowadays people use phones for almost everything. It helps me organize my work and studies, manage tasks, and easily add or remove items when needed.

× Yeah, quite usually I make a list when I go to shopping to avoid forgetting buy anything, especially for some special event.

✓ Yeah, I quite usually make a list when I go shopping to avoid forgetting to buy anything, especially for some special events.

The adverb 'quite usually' should be placed before the main verb 'make' for correct adverb placement. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'forgetting buy' is missing 'to' before 'buy'. 'Some special event' should be plural 'some special events' to match the context.

× Yeah, quite usually I make a list when I go to shopping to avoid forgetting buy anything, especially for some special event.

✓ Yeah, I quite usually make a list when I go shopping to avoid forgetting to buy anything, especially for some special events.

After 'avoid', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'forgetting buy' should be 'forgetting to buy'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'.

× And I also make A to do list to organize my work better.

✓ And I also make a to-do list to organize my work better.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound noun.

× Yeah, I always make a list for my work and is really work I. Account. Avoid forgetting and many tasks and specially that I can organize my work variance an manage my terms.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list for my work and it really works. It helps me avoid forgetting many tasks and especially allows me to organize my work better and manage my time.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'and is really work I. Account.' is incorrect and should be 'and it really works.' 'Avoid forgetting and many tasks' is incomplete and should be 'helps me avoid forgetting many tasks.' 'specially that I can organize my work variance an manage my terms' is unclear and corrected to 'especially allows me to organize my work better and manage my time.'

× I think people don't want to rely too much on a fixed blend. They want you. They want to ask mom response tentatively to adapt to the different situations.

✓ I think people don't want to rely too much on a fixed plan. They want to be flexible. They want to respond tentatively to adapt to different situations.

'blend' should be 'plan'. 'They want you.' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'They want to be flexible.' 'ask mom response' is incorrect; it should be 'respond tentatively'. The pronouns and words were misused and corrected for clarity.

× Definitely on my phone because now they people use phone for almost everything.

✓ Definitely on my phone because now people use phones for almost everything.

'they people' is incorrect; it should be 'people'. Also, 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to match 'people'.

× I can use my phone to organize my work and my study, to manage all the tasks and sometimes I can add or remove the task conveniently.

✓ I can use my phone to organize my work and my study, to manage all the tasks and sometimes I can add or remove tasks conveniently.

'the task' should be plural 'tasks' to be consistent with 'all the tasks' and the context of adding or removing multiple tasks.