List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、より自然で効果的な英語表現を使うことが必要です。例えば、"I don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember what to buy."のように簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember the items I need to buy.

제안: 回答が少し混乱しており、文法的な誤りや繰り返しが目立ちます。より明確で論理的な構成を心がけ、例えば"I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and live comfortably. I believe planning is essential."のように述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and live comfortably. I believe planning is essential to manage tasks effectively.

제안: 回答が非常に短く、文法的にも不自然です。理由を具体的に述べ、接続詞を使って説明を展開すると良いでしょう。例えば、"Some people find making lists bothersome because it takes time and feels like a chore."のように表現してください。

예시: Some people find making lists bothersome because it takes time and feels like a chore.

제안: 回答が断片的で文法的に不正確です。より流暢で論理的な文章を作るために、接続詞を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、"I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and faster than using paper."のように述べてください。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and faster than using paper.

× I don't make our list when I shop because I'm 18 years old and I have good memory for shopping, so I understand, so I remember what I should buy.

✓ I don't make my list when I shop because I'm 18 years old and I have a good memory for shopping, so I understand and remember what I should buy.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here because the list belongs to the speaker alone, so 'my' should be used. Also, 'good memory' needs the article 'a' before it. The sentence also had redundant 'so' which was corrected for clarity.

× I make a. List for my work because work is so important for me to spend a comfortable life.

✓ I make a list for my work because work is so important for me to live a comfortable life.

The article 'a' should be directly followed by the noun without a period. Also, 'to spend a comfortable life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to live a comfortable life'.

× So I'm, I, I think, must I think that we must make a plan or schedule for work.

✓ So I think that we must make a plan or schedule for work.

The sentence had unnecessary repetition of 'I' and awkward phrasing 'must I think'. Simplifying to 'I think that' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× Some people think bothersome to make a list.

✓ Some people think it is bothersome to make a list.

The original sentence lacks a subject for the adjective 'bothersome'. Adding 'it is' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I prefer using a phone when I make a list becauses phone is. Very convenient for me.

✓ I prefer using a phone when I make a list because the phone is very convenient for me.

The word 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. Also, 'phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific object. The sentence was also fragmented and corrected for fluency.

× An phone is very. Phone is more convenience than paper.

✓ A phone is very convenient. A phone is more convenient than paper.

'An' is incorrect before 'phone' because 'phone' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' is correct. 'Convenience' is a noun; the adjective 'convenient' should be used here. The sentence was also fragmented and corrected for clarity.

× Be 'cause phone, 'cause I. Must just typing.

✓ Because of the phone, I just need to type.

The phrase 'Be 'cause phone, 'cause I. Must just typing.' is fragmented and incorrect. 'Because of' is the correct preposition phrase, and 'must just typing' is incorrect; it should be 'I just need to type' to express the intended meaning clearly.