List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, instead of 'like I think that it is the best way to remember things and so that I can not spend too much money on insufficient things,' you could say 'because it helps me remember what I need and avoid overspending on unnecessary items.'

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and avoid spending too much on unnecessary things.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structure. For example, say 'Yes, I am an organised person, so making a list for work helps me stay on track and manage my routine effectively.'

예시: Yes, I am an organised person, so making a list for work helps me stay on track and manage my routine effectively.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything. Moreover, they find it inconvenient to carry a list around, so they prefer not to make one.'

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything. Moreover, they find it inconvenient to carry a list around, so they prefer not to make one.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has many grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to be concise and clear. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient; I always carry my phone, so I don't need to bring a paper list.'

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient; I always carry my phone, so I don't need to bring a paper list.

× I think some people don't like to make list becaused they think that they remember everything.

✓ I think some people don't like to make lists because they think that they remember everything.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of making multiple lists, not just one. Also, 'becaused' is a typo and should be corrected to 'because'.

× Most of the time I like to make it list on my phone because it is more convenient than carrying a list with us because we always whenever we care, whenever we go outside, we always carry your phone without us.

✓ Most of the time I like to make the list on my phone because it is more convenient than carrying a list with us since whenever we go outside, we always carry our phone with us.

The phrase 'make it list' is incorrect; it should be 'make the list'. The preposition 'with us' is misplaced and should be used correctly as 'carry our phone with us'. Also, 'care' is a typo for 'go'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper preposition use.

× Yes I'm so organized person so making a list for a work makes me more organized and my or delete routine goanim passed away with making a list.

✓ Yes, I'm a very organized person, so making a list for work makes me more organized and helps my daily routine go smoothly.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect pronouns and words ('or delete routine goanim passed away'). It is corrected to use proper pronouns and clearer expression. 'A work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here and does not need an article. 'My daily routine' is the correct phrase.

× That's why they prefer to make do not make list.

✓ That's why they prefer not to make lists.

The phrase 'make do not make list' is incorrect. It should be 'prefer not to make lists'. Also, 'list' should be plural as it refers to the general action.