List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تحسين القواعد اللغوية واستخدام كلمات أكثر دقة. كما يجب أن تكون الجمل أكثر ترابطًا وتجنب التكرار. استخدم عبارات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. For example, last weekend I forgot many items because I didn't prepare a list. Therefore, making a list is very beneficial as it increases the chance of buying all the necessary things.

제안: ركز على تحسين النطق والقواعد، واستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة. حاول استخدام كلمات مناسبة للسياق وتجنب الأخطاء الإملائية. اربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me improve my skills and seize opportunities. Preparing a list allows me to plan my tasks effectively and manage my time precisely.

제안: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر تنوعًا وتجنب التكرار. استخدم عبارات ربط لتوضيح السبب والنتيجة بشكل أفضل.

예시: I believe some people rely on their memory and prefer not to make lists because they think they can remember everything. Therefore, it depends on individual preferences and how good their memory is.

제안: حاول تنظيم الجمل بشكل أفضل واستخدام زمن واحد متسق. استخدم كلمات مناسبة وواضحة لتوضيح التفضيل بشكل أكثر دقة.

예시: In the past, I preferred making lists on paper because my phone was old. However, now with advanced technology, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is much easier to access them.

× Yes I do sometimes making a list help you a lot to remember everything you want to buy.

✓ Yes, I do. Sometimes making a list helps you a lot to remember everything you want to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'do' with 'sometimes making' without proper punctuation and verb agreement. 'Making' should be the subject of the clause, and the verb 'help' should be in third person singular 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for clarity.

× Last weekend I went to buy something but I didn't make a less, so I forget most of the things what I need.

✓ Last weekend I went to buy something but I didn't make a list, so I forgot most of the things that I needed.

The word 'less' is a typo and should be 'list'. The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past context. Also, 'what I need' should be 'that I needed' to correctly refer to past necessity.

× So I think unless it is very beneficial to remember everything you want, enhance your chance to bring everything you want.

✓ So I think making a list is very beneficial to remember everything you want and enhances your chance to bring everything you want.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb in the second clause. 'Unless' is incorrectly used; it should be replaced with a clear statement. The verb 'enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'.

× Yes, I make a less for my work every time becausde that helped me a lot to enhance my opportunities and improve my skills in my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work every time because that helps me a lot to enhance my opportunities and improve my skills in my work.

The word 'less' is a typo and should be 'list'. 'Becausde' is a typo and should be 'because'. The verb 'helped' should be 'helps' to agree with the present tense 'I make' and the habitual action.

× Preparing a list. Well give you oppurtunity's to make a good plan for your job and white time exactly.

✓ Preparing a list will give you opportunities to make a good plan for your job and manage your time exactly.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject-verb structure. 'Well' should be 'will'. 'Oppurtunity's' is misspelled and incorrectly uses an apostrophe; it should be 'opportunities'. 'White time exactly' is incorrect and should be 'manage your time exactly' or similar.

× I think some people trust in their memory so they don't prefer to make a list because they said we can remember everything you want and we don't need to waste time on preparing a list.

✓ I think some people trust their memory, so they don't prefer to make a list because they say we can remember everything we want and don't need to waste time preparing a list.

The phrase 'trust in their memory' should be 'trust their memory' without 'in'. 'They said' should be 'they say' to maintain present tense. 'Waste time on preparing' should be 'waste time preparing' without 'on'.

× Almost there. In the past I preferred to make a list on the paper because my phone was old so but with the new technique in the phones, I'll prefer to make the list on the phone that much easier for me to take it.

✓ Almost there. In the past, I preferred to make a list on paper because my phone was old, but with the new technology in phones, I prefer to make the list on the phone as it is much easier for me to use.

'On the paper' should be 'on paper' without 'the'. The phrase 'so but' is contradictory; 'but' alone is sufficient. 'Technique' should be 'technology'. 'I'll prefer' should be 'I prefer' to express current preference. 'That much easier for me to take it' is awkward; 'as it is much easier for me to use' is clearer.