List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和句子结构。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to buy whatever catches my eye at the moment, especially if I find something cute or interesting.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和拼写，明确说明做列表的目的和效果。

예시: Yes, I do make lists for my work. As a high school student, I have a lot of homework and tests, so writing lists helps me keep track of my tasks and stay organized.

제안: 回答不连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清楚。建议用完整句子表达观点，解释原因，并避免断句错误。

예시: Some people might find making lists annoying because they feel it restricts their freedom and they have to strictly follow the plan.

제안: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达偏好，说明理由，并注意单词拼写和句子结构。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it's practical and convenient. You only need a pen and paper, and it's less likely to be lost compared to a phone.

× This when I working into the shop, I saw a very cute or adorable items.

✓ This when I was working in the shop, I saw very cute or adorable items.

这里需要使用过去进行时态，表示过去某个时间正在进行的动作，应该用"was working"。另外，介词应为"in"而不是"into"。

× I saw a very cute or adorable items.

✓ I saw very cute or adorable items.

"items"是复数，前面不应该有不定冠词"a"，应去掉。

× I just to take it.

✓ I just took it.

动词"take"在这里应使用过去式"took"，且不需要不定式"to"。

× Yes I do and you know as a high school student there a lot of homework and tax test to do so usually write some listed down to make sure everything was Dell and everything is going well on my routine.

✓ Yes, I do. And you know, as a high school student, there is a lot of homework and tests to do, so I usually write some lists down to make sure everything is done and everything is going well in my routine.

"there a lot of"缺少动词，应为"there is a lot of"。"tax test"应为"tests"。"listed down"应为"lists down"。"was Dell"应为"is done"。"on my routine"应为"in my routine"。

× Maybe it's just kind of annoying. You know when you write something or take something down, you need to go or follow the details. Which just alike. In. Limited your behavior.

✓ Maybe it's just kind of annoying. You know, when you write something or take something down, you need to follow the details, which just limits your behavior.

"go or follow"应为"follow"。"Which just alike. In. Limited your behavior."句子结构混乱，应改为"which just limits your behavior"。

× I think is paper.

✓ I think it is paper.

缺少主语"it"，应为"I think it is paper"。

× Paper if you write something down on your paper is more practical and convenient.

✓ Paper, if you write something down on paper, is more practical and convenient.

"on your paper"应为"on paper"，表示一般情况。

× You just need a pen and a paper to write it down, not a foe.

✓ You just need a pen and paper to write it down, not a phone.

"a paper"前不需要冠词，且"foe"应为"phone"。

× A form may be can be easier to be lossed, but a paper you can take it everywhere.

✓ A phone may be easier to lose, but with paper you can take it everywhere.

"A form"应为"A phone"。"can be easier to be lossed"表达错误，应为"may be easier to lose"。"a paper"前不需要冠词，且"take it everywhere"前应加介词"with"。