List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ như "lit" thay vì "list", và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh hoặc thiếu liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me organize everything I need to buy and prevents me from exceeding my budget. Having a clear list also saves me time in the store and helps me avoid unnecessary purchases.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng câu hỏi về việc làm danh sách cho công việc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác, câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important duties. This method works well for me as it increases my productivity and reduces stress.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý rõ ràng để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks. Additionally, they may feel that lists create unnecessary pressure by constantly reminding them of unfinished work.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như "assessable" thay vì "accessible" và "Sign thing" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ chính xác và tránh lỗi nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing a paper list. Also, using my phone helps me stay organized since I always have it with me.

× Yes, I always have a lit when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I always have a list when I go shopping.

The word 'lit' is a typo and should be 'list'. Also, 'list' is singular and correctly used here. The error is a spelling mistake affecting clarity.

× Because it helps me organize everything I need to buy an prevents me from buying more than my budget for December.

✓ Because it helps me organize everything I need to buy and prevents me from buying more than my budget for December.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to correctly connect the two clauses. Using 'an' here is incorrect and disrupts sentence flow.

× Have a clear list I can say time in store and avoid.

✓ Having a clear list, I can save time in the store and avoid unnecessary purchases.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Have a clear list I can say time in store and avoid' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence.

× Does it work? Yes, I always have a list when I go shopping because it's hot.

✓ Does it work? Yes, I always have a list when I go shopping because it's helpful.

The word 'hot' is incorrect in this context; it seems to be a typo for 'helpful'. The sentence needs a word that explains why having a list works.

× Miss organ I everything I need to buy an prevents me from spending more than my budget especially in the supermarket where helps so much discount and promotions.

✓ It helps me organize everything I need to buy and prevents me from spending more than my budget, especially in the supermarket where there are many discounts and promotions.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'Miss organ' should be 'It helps me organize'; 'an' should be 'and'; 'where helps so much discount and promotions' is incorrect and should be 'where there are many discounts and promotions'. The sentence needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× Some people dislike making list Bickard defiance rested Steve Ann before more spontaneous approach to organize their task.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks.

The original sentence has many errors: 'list' should be plural 'lists'; 'Bickard defiance rested Steve Ann before' is nonsensical and replaced with 'because they prefer'; 'organize their task' should be 'organizing their tasks' for correct verb form and plural noun.

× Additionally, some may feel that list as unnecessary pressures are stressed, like constantly reminding them of unfinished work.

✓ Additionally, some may feel that lists cause unnecessary pressure and stress, like constantly reminding them of unfinished work.

The phrase 'list as unnecessary pressures are stressed' is incorrect. It should be 'lists cause unnecessary pressure and stress' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient an assessable.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

The word 'assessable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'accessible'. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the adjectives properly.

× Sign thing, I always have it with me.

✓ Since then, I always have it with me.

'Sign thing' is a typo or mishearing of 'Since then'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the phrase.