List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember all the food items I need to buy.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp lại và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I make a schedule for my work every day. It helps me know what I need to study and allows me to follow my plan easily.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it wastes time or they can remember their tasks without writing them down.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và liên kết các ý bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: From my perspective, I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them easily without unlocking my phone. Also, I can put the list on my desk, so it's convenient to check.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I show all go to supermarket for buying some food from my mother because I think is a easy way for me to find some items that I need are find some food. That I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go to the supermarket to buy some food for my mother because I think it is an easy way for me to find the items that I need to buy.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors including incorrect word order and missing articles. 'show all go to supermarket' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the supermarket'. 'is a easy way' should be 'it is an easy way' because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'that I need are find some food' is confusing and should be corrected to 'the items that I need to buy'. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I make a schedule for myself and I think it's really useful for me because I can know exactly that the. Was thinking that I need to study in a day an also I can easily do follow the the follow my schedule my schedule.

✓ Yes, I make a schedule for myself and I think it's really useful because I can know exactly what I need to study in a day, and I can easily follow my schedule.

The original sentence contains incomplete and repeated phrases such as 'that the. Was thinking' and 'do follow the the follow my schedule my schedule'. These are sentence structure errors that confuse the meaning. The corrected sentence removes these errors and clarifies the intended meaning.

× I think that maybe they think that is. Uh, why is there time? In may be that they don't need to see the list because they can remember all the things that they need to do in each day in each day.

✓ I think maybe they feel it takes time, or maybe they don't need to see the list because they can remember all the things they need to do each day.

The original sentence has unclear and fragmented phrases like 'that is. Uh, why is there time? In may be'. These are sentence structure errors that make the sentence hard to understand. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and removes unnecessary repetitions.

× Far my perspective I refer mega list on paper because you can easily see it without open the phones and also you can save your time.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer making a list on paper because you can easily see it without opening the phone, and also you can save time.

The original sentence misuses prepositions: 'Far my perspective' should be 'From my perspective'; 'refer mega list' is incorrect and should be 'prefer making a list'; 'without open the phones' should be 'without opening the phone'. Correct preposition and verb forms are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× You can put the list on the war on your table that you usually work.

✓ You can put the list on the wall or on your table where you usually work.

The phrase 'on the war on your table' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends 'on the wall or on your table'. Also, 'that you usually work' should be 'where you usually work' to correctly refer to the location. These are sentence structure and preposition errors.

× Oh, it's easy to look into. Need to open your phone?

✓ Oh, it's easy to look at without needing to open your phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'Look into' is incorrect here; 'look at' is appropriate. Also, 'Need to open your phone?' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity.