List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えが短すぎて情報が不足しています。質問に対して直接答えた後、理由や状況を具体的に説明することで、より自然で効果的な回答になります。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

제안: 文が断片的でつながりが不自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。また、文法の誤りを修正し、より具体的な説明を加えてください。

예시: Yes, I do. I think organizing tasks by priority is very helpful, especially when I am busy, because it helps me focus on the most important work first.

제안: 文法の誤りがあり、意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接答えた後、理由を具体的に説明し、文法を正しく使うことが重要です。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful to remember all the tasks, or they prefer to rely on their memory instead.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で繰り返しや文の切れ目が多いです。理由を明確にし、文をつなげて自然な流れにすることが必要です。具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can easily add items anytime and anywhere. If I use paper, I sometimes forget to bring it with me, which makes it less convenient.

× Yes, I do because. I think organizing the task by priority. Is very helpful when I say when I am busy.

✓ Yes, I do because I think organizing tasks by priority is very helpful when I am busy.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. The periods incorrectly separate what should be a single sentence. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Combining the fragments into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Because people doesn't want to forget that things.

✓ Because people don't want to forget those things.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'that things' is incorrect; it should be 'those things' to correctly refer to plural objects. Correct subject-verb agreement and demonstrative pronoun usage are necessary here.