List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，同时简洁明了地表达观点。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go out. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time while shopping.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，逻辑不清晰。建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达原因和效果。

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize urgent tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: 句子结构复杂且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点并使用正确的语法。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they already know what to do and feel that making a list wastes their time.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，影响理解。建议使用简单句子，清晰表达偏好和理由。

예시: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can set reminders and manage my time better than using paper lists.

× Yes, I will make a shopping checklist before I went out.

✓ Yes, I make a shopping checklist before I go out.

这里时态不一致。'will make'是将来时，'went'是过去时，句子中应保持时态一致，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。

× This can make sure that I bought everything that I need and I do not need to spend a short time too.

✓ This can make sure that I buy everything that I need and I do not need to spend too much time.

'bought'是过去时，句子描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时' buy'。另外，'a short time'用法不当，应改为'too much time'表示时间过长。

× Think in their shopping more.

✓ I think more about my shopping.

原句结构不完整且不通顺，应调整为完整句子表达清楚意思。

× Yes, I will make A to do list for my workout because it can make me to know that which drop is quiet.

✓ Yes, I will make a to-do list for my work because it can help me know which task is urgent.

'A'应小写'a'，'to do list'应连字符为'to-do list'，'workout'错误，应为'work'，'make me to know'结构错误，应为'help me know'，'drop is quiet'表达错误，应为'task is urgent'。

× I will make A to do list for my workout because it can make me to know that which drop is quiet. Urgency so I can do it first and make sure that I did not miss anything.

✓ I will make a to-do list for my work because it can help me know which task is urgent, so I can do it first and make sure that I do not miss anything.

'make me to know'用法错误，应为'help me know'；'did not miss'时态不对，应为一般现在时'do not miss'，因为描述习惯动作。

× I think because they are clearly know that what they need to do so they did not need to spend an extra time to make a list for helping them to know about it.

✓ I think it's because they clearly know what they need to do, so they do not need to spend extra time making a list to help them remember it.

'they are clearly know'结构错误，应为'they clearly know'；'did not need'时态不对，应为一般现在时'do not need'；'an extra time'冠词错误，应为'extra time'；'for helping them to know about it'表达不自然，应改为'making a list to help them remember it'。

× So maybe they will think that is is wasting their time.

✓ So maybe they think that it is wasting their time.

'will think'时态不合适，描述习惯用一般现在时'think'；'that is is'重复，应改为'that it is'。

× Actually, I prefer to make a checklist on phone because you can market that I'm an Put it in the calendar to remind yourself an.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a checklist on my phone because you can mark items and put them in the calendar to remind yourself.

'market'应为'mark'；'I'm an'无意义，应删除；'remind yourself an'结构错误，应为'remind yourself'；'on phone'应为'on my phone'。

× It can have her good time management than less on the paper.

✓ It can help better time management than using paper.

'have her good time management'表达错误，应为'help better time management'；'than less on the paper'不通顺，应为'than using paper'。