List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak daha etkili ve akıcı olması için cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, neden liste yapmanın faydalı olduğunu biraz daha detaylandırabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember the items I need and to avoid overspending. This helps me stay within my budget and prevents unnecessary purchases.

제안: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve cümleleriniz tam olarak akıcı değil. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz birbirine bağlanmamış. Daha düzgün gramer kullanarak ve bağlaçlarla cümleleri birleştirerek daha etkili cevaplar verebilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I always make a list of my work tasks because it helps me stay organized and save time. Without a list, I might forget important duties.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı şekilde kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden bazı insanların liste yapmayı sevmediğini daha net açıklamalısınız.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember tasks without writing them down. Also, they might think making lists wastes time.

제안: Cümleleriniz kısa ve noktalama işaretleri yanlış kullanılmış. Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru şekilde bağlayarak cevap verebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, neden kağıt tercih ettiğinizi biraz daha detaylandırabilirsiniz.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing by hand, and it helps me remember tasks better than using my phone.

× Yes, I'm always make a list for my work and tasks I have to do because I believe that it helps me.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and tasks I have to do because I believe that it helps me.

The error is due to incorrect verb form after the auxiliary verb 'am'. 'I'm always make' is incorrect; it should be 'I always make' because 'always' is an adverb of frequency and the simple present tense is used to express habitual actions. The auxiliary 'am' is unnecessary here.

× Stay organized and save time.

✓ It helps me stay organized and save time.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to include a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× And I won't remember what I have to do.

✓ Otherwise, I won't remember what I have to do.

The sentence starts with 'And' which is informal and the meaning is unclear. Adding 'Otherwise' clarifies the consequence and improves sentence flow.

× I think they might think that if they will remember it and they will remember eyes, what they need to do or buy.

✓ I think they might believe that they will remember what they need to do or buy without making a list.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'remember eyes'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and improves sentence structure.

× And maybe they think that. It's spam takes time. End. Yep.

✓ Maybe they think that making a list takes time, so they avoid it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a coherent sentence explaining the possible reason some people dislike making lists.