List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your response smoother. Try to avoid repeating similar phrases like "a lot easier" and "a lot more organized."

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop. For instance, if I plan to cook a specific recipe, I write down all the necessary ingredients beforehand. This approach helps me shop efficiently and keeps me well-organized.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full, coherent response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to explain how making a list helps you prioritize tasks.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me a lot. When I have many tasks, the list allows me to prioritize which ones to do first, so I can manage my time effectively.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words and complete sentences.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming. Also, they might already remember what to buy, so they feel making a list is unnecessary.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words to compare the two options.

예시: Although I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more tactile, I find using my phone more convenient and easier. Therefore, I usually make lists on my phone for practicality.

× For example, when I have a recipe in mind that I wanted to cook, then I list all the ingredients before I go shopping.

✓ For example, when I have a recipe in mind that I want to cook, then I list all the ingredients before I go shopping.

The verb 'wanted' is in the past tense, but the context refers to a present or future intention. It should be 'want' to match the present tense of 'have'.

× Yes, I make a lisk when I work and it does work for me. For example. If I have a lot of tasks and it's hard to prioritize, which one should I do first? So. In order to. To be able.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I work and it does work for me. For example, if I have a lot of tasks and it's hard to prioritize which one I should do first, I make a list in order to be able to manage them better.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete, lacking proper sentence structure. 'Lisk' is a typo and should be 'list'. The fragments 'So. In order to. To be able.' are incomplete thoughts and need to be combined into a complete sentence for clarity.

× Some people might not like making lists because. It can be time consuming. They might already know. What to buy? In their mind, so they don't need to. Come sit down and take time in making.

✓ Some people might not like making lists because it can be time-consuming. They might already know what to buy in their mind, so they don't need to sit down and take time making a list.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect punctuation. Sentences should be complete and connected properly. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. The phrase 'come sit down' is incorrect; 'sit down' suffices.

× Although I do. Want to make a list on paper because it's more tactile but. Making a list on my phone is a lot more convenient and easier. Hence although I want to make list using paper. It's easier for me to do it unfold.

✓ Although I do want to make a list on paper because it's more tactile, making a list on my phone is a lot more convenient and easier. Hence, although I want to make a list using paper, it's easier for me to do it on my phone.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect preposition usage. 'Do it unfold' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'do it on my phone'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. Proper conjunctions and punctuation are needed to connect ideas clearly.