List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和主谓一致问题，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致，使用简单明了的句子结构，并避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves money by preventing unnecessary purchases.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I make a list of tasks for my work, but it doesn't always work because I don't always follow it perfectly.

제안: 回答中词汇使用错误（如confluence, plane），表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it complicates their lives and prefer to plan their day spontaneously.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致和词序。

예시: I usually make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can check it anywhere without carrying extra items like a notebook.

× Is I usually make a list when I was shopping because it will help me to not forget things and it will help me too. Reducing my cost.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me not to forget things and it also helps me reduce my cost.

句子中主语“I”与动词“is”不一致，应该用“I usually make”而不是“Is I usually make”。另外，时态应与习惯动作一致，使用一般现在时。"help me to not forget"中不需要“to”，应为"help me not to forget"或"help me not forget"。最后，“Reducing my cost”是一个不完整的句子，应改为完整表达。

× I usually make a list when I was shopping because it will help me to not forget things and it will help me too. Reducing my cost.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me not to forget things and it also helps me reduce my cost.

句中“when I was shopping”使用了过去进行时，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“when I shop”。

× Maybe making lists will confluence their lives, their plane, and they can plan what they will do today by themselves very well.

✓ Maybe making lists will confuse their lives and plans, and they can plan what they will do today by themselves very well.

“will confluence”用词错误，应为“will confuse”，表示“使混乱”。另外，“plane”应为“plan”，表示“计划”。

× Are usually make a list to use my phone on my phone memo. It is more convenient and I can see it in everywhere without brings the different things as a book.

✓ I usually make a list using the memo on my phone. It is more convenient and I can see it everywhere without carrying different things like a book.

“Are usually make”主语和动词不匹配，应为“I usually make”。“to use my phone on my phone memo”表达不清，应改为“using the memo on my phone”。“in everywhere”应为“everywhere”。“without brings”应为“without carrying”。“as a book”应为“like a book”。