List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping. I prefer to buy things spontaneously, but sometimes it makes me spend more time in the supermarket.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and save time. This way, I can work more effectively and manage my time better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember their tasks well and work effectively without writing them down.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng bị lặp từ và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It also reminds me about my tasks, so I don't forget anything.

× Awesome, I don't make a list when I shop, I just want to think of I will consume when I'm up there when I until their supermarket.

✓ Awesome, I don't make a list when I shop; I just think about what I will consume when I am at the supermarket.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing. 'I just want to think of I will consume' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunction and clearer phrasing to express the intended meaning.

× I think Michael is is make a more selective and control our time.

✓ I think making a list helps me be more selective and control my time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Michael is is make' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper verb forms and sentence structure.

× Yes, I usually make a list woman.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list, woman.

The word 'woman' is incorrectly used here; it seems misplaced or a typo. If 'woman' is intended as a form of address, it should be separated by a comma. Otherwise, it should be removed for clarity.

× Because helping to organize my work and save it my time is make me more working, more effective and manage my time better.

✓ Because it helps me organize my work and save time, making me more productive and better at managing my time.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Is make me more working' is ungrammatical. The correction uses proper verb forms and clearer expression.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they think they can all the light the work effective body on self and they don't need to make a list.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe they can do the work effectively by themselves and don't need a list.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'all the light the work effective body on self.' The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper vocabulary and sentence structure.

× Because sometimes some people think they can do is better. Then.

✓ Sometimes, people think they can do better without a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The correction completes the thought with proper sentence structure.

× I I'm more into making a list on my phone because my phone I always bring my phone.

✓ I'm more into making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkward. The correction removes redundancy and improves clarity.

× And I can remember every time.

✓ And I can remember it every time.

The verb 'remember' requires an object; 'it' is needed to specify what is remembered.

× And it's gonna remind me for. Of showing the list.

✓ And it reminds me by showing the list.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence.