List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“it'll will waste”重复使用助动词。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it time-consuming and prefer to buy things spontaneously.

제안: 回答中多处语法错误，如“make a letter”应为“make a list”，“should should”重复，且句子不连贯。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks and complete them efficiently.

제안: 回答语法混乱，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议先用一句话直接回答，再用具体原因支持，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, they prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

제안: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“make a letter”应为“make a list”，句子结构混乱且表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并注意句子逻辑。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper lists which I might forget to bring.

× No, I never make a list because I think it is really difficult to make and if I make a list it'll will waste a lot of my time.

✓ No, I never make a list because I think it is really difficult to make and if I make a list it will waste a lot of my time.

句中出现了重复的情态动词“will”，应删除多余的“will”，保持句子结构正确。

× Yes, I usually make a letter from my work because I always need to remember what work should should do and it will works in helping me to finishing my task sticks.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I always need to remember what work I should do and it works in helping me finish my tasks.

“make a letter”应为“make a list”，表示制作清单；“should should”重复，应去掉一个；“it will works”中“works”应为单数形式“work”，且不需要“will”；“to finishing”应为“finish”；“task sticks”应为复数“tasks”。

× Yes, I usually make a letter from my work because I always need to remember what work should should do and it will works in helping me to finishing my task sticks.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I always need to remember what work I should do and it works in helping me finish my tasks.

“should should”重复，应去掉一个，且“should”后应接动词原形。

× Maybe some people think it is really difficult and. Making this also go spend a lot of their time.

✓ Maybe some people think it is really difficult. Making this also spends a lot of their time.

“Making this also go spend”结构错误，应改为“Making this also spends”，动名词作主语时谓语动词用单数形式。

× What another reason may be there to see can remember what tasks they need to do in their mind?

✓ What other reason may there be to help remember what tasks they need to do in their mind?

句子结构混乱，应调整为正确的疑问句结构，使用“may there be”表达存在，且“to see can remember”不合适，改为“to help remember”。

× I prefer make a letter on my phone because I always check my phone to everywhere but where I want to go and I always will forget to take a paper which has restaurant a letter.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always check my phone everywhere I go and I always forget to take a paper which has a restaurant list.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”；“make a letter”应为“make a list”；“check my phone to everywhere but where I want to go”表达不通顺，改为“check my phone everywhere I go”；“always will forget”时态错误，改为“always forget”；“a paper which has restaurant a letter”应为“a paper which has a restaurant list”。