List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding pauses and filler words. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'I go shopping' instead of 'I go to shopping'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and saves time.

제안: Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structure. For example, say 'I make a list to remember tasks' instead of 'to remembering'. Also, use linking words like 'so' or 'because' to explain why making lists is helpful.

예시: Absolutely yes. I make a list at work to remember important tasks and to schedule upcoming activities, so I can manage my time effectively.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid repetition like 'they they'. Also, explain the idea more clearly using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember things easily, so they feel making a list is unnecessary.

제안: Work on pronunciation and sentence structure. For example, say 'I prefer' instead of 'Isley prefer'. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'make English toner paper' and use correct expressions such as 'making a list on paper'.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is easy, simple, and saves time compared to writing on paper.

× Yes, usually I make a list when I. Go to shopping.

✓ Yes, usually I make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is a gerund and does not require the preposition 'to' after 'go'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. This is a common error involving verb + -ing form (ID 8).

× And it's helped me to keep in mind T items that. I can buy.

✓ And it helps me to keep in mind the items that I can buy.

The use of 'it's helped' suggests past perfect tense, but the context implies a habitual action, so present simple 'it helps' is appropriate. Also, 'T items' seems to be a typo for 'the items'. This correction addresses verb tense (ID 6) and article usage (ID 22).

× When I was in my work I make the list to remembering the task and make a schedule for the upcoming task that are very important for me.

✓ When I was at work, I made a list to remember the tasks and made a schedule for the upcoming tasks that were very important to me.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Was' indicates past, so verbs should be in past tense: 'made' instead of 'make'. Also, 'to remembering' should be 'to remember' (infinitive form). 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match context. Preposition 'in my work' should be 'at work'. This involves past tense issue (ID 5), verb form (ID 8), plural issue (ID 1), and preposition use (ID 11).

× ...make a schedule for the upcoming task that are very important for me.

✓ ...make a schedule for the upcoming tasks that are very important for me.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple upcoming tasks. The verb 'are' correctly agrees with plural subject. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Some people think that they can remember the. Things easily so they they can't. Make the list.

✓ Some people think that they can remember things easily, so they don't make a list.

The sentence has repeated 'they' and incorrect use of 'can't' which changes the meaning. The intended meaning is that they do not make a list because they think they can remember things. Also, unnecessary periods disrupt sentence flow. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue (ID 12 and 26).

× Isley. Prefer to make a list on my mobile phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone.

'Isley' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'I'. The pronoun 'I' is needed as the subject. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× I feel that make English toner paper is very. Time consuming.

✓ I feel that making a list on paper is very time consuming.

The phrase 'make English toner paper' is unclear and likely a misstatement. The intended meaning is probably 'making a list on paper'. Also, 'time consuming' should be one word 'time-consuming' but as per instruction, only grammar issues are corrected. This involves verb + -ing form (ID 8) and preposition use (ID 11).