List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use consistent verb tenses and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of switching from present to past tense ('I do' then 'I tried'), keep it consistent. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice; be more concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy, especially when I have specific items in mind.

제안: Maintain consistent verb tenses and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words more naturally and avoid awkward phrasing like 'checking of what I'm down'. Also, try to be more concise and precise in your explanations.

예시: Yes, I make a list every morning before work. It helps me remember my tasks and manage my time effectively because I can check off each item as I complete it.

제안: Avoid awkward phrases like 'it is hustle for them' and improve vocabulary usage. Use clearer expressions and provide more specific reasons with linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: I think some people find making lists inconvenient because they trust their memory. Additionally, they might enjoy shopping spontaneously or making impulse purchases.

제안: Use more natural expressions and avoid awkward phrases like 'I always go around with it' and 'we can keep the list for the next day onwards.' Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I rarely forget my list. Plus, if I don't finish all my tasks, I can easily carry them over to the next day.

× Therefore, especially when I have specific things to buy, I tried to create a list.

✓ Therefore, especially when I have specific things to buy, I try to create a list.

The sentence is describing a habitual action in the present, so the past tense 'tried' is incorrect. It should be in the present tense 'try' to match the context.

× Every day before I start working, I tried to make a list of what I should do on that day.

✓ Every day before I start working, I try to make a list of what I should do on that day.

The phrase 'Every day' indicates a habitual action, so the verb should be in the present tense 'try' instead of the past tense 'tried'.

× Secondly, by checking of what I'm down in the list, it becomes easy to control the time management.

✓ Secondly, by checking off what I've done in the list, it becomes easy to control time management.

The phrase 'checking of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'checking off'. Also, 'I'm down' is incorrect; it should be 'I've done' to indicate completed tasks. Additionally, 'the time management' should be 'time management' without 'the'.