List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go grocery shopping. This helps me stay organised and remember what I need to buy, which saves time and money.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes that affect understanding. Provide a direct response with a clear explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: No, I don't make lists for my work because I do repair jobs, and making a list doesn't really help me in this kind of work.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it takes extra time and effort, which they prefer to avoid.

제안: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains errors and awkward phrasing. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons, using linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I don't need to carry paper and a pen. This makes it more convenient.

× I usually make a shopping list for shopping, specially in grocery shopping because is very easy to.

✓ I usually make a shopping list, especially for grocery shopping because it is very easy.

The phrase 'specially in grocery shopping' is incorrect; 'especially for grocery shopping' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'because is very easy to' is incomplete and missing the subject 'it' and the verb 'is'. The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and completes the clause.

× Where can I stay potent and the price so will more easy to buy something.

✓ This sentence is unclear and should be rewritten for clarity, for example: 'This helps me stay focused and makes it easier to buy things at a good price.'

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and coherence. A clearer sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and logical flow is necessary.

× No, I will not do the nice for the work because my work is a repair duty so Denise is not help any more.

✓ No, I do not make a list for work because my job is repair work, so a list does not help anymore.

'Will not do the nice' is incorrect modal verb usage and word choice. The sentence should use the present simple tense 'do not make' to express habitual action. Also, 'Denise' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'this' or 'it', and 'is not help' should be 'does not help'.

× I think the people think. Create a shopping list will be more. Spend more time to do this.

✓ I think people believe that creating a shopping list takes more time.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and sentence fragments. 'The people' is better as 'people' in general. The sentence needs to be combined and rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× IP Furt. By the phone because I always keep the phone belonging so I don't need to bring the paper and a pen at the same time.

✓ I prefer using the phone because I always keep it with me, so I don't need to bring paper and a pen at the same time.

'IP Furt. By the phone' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'I prefer by the phone'. 'Keep the phone belonging' is incorrect; it should be 'keep it with me'. The sentence needs proper pronoun use and clearer phrasing.

× So that is small convenience.

✓ So that is a small convenience.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'small convenience'. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.