List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Javobingizda gaplarni to'liq va aniq ifodalashga e'tibor bering. Gaplaringizni birlashtirish uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va ortiqcha takrorlanishlardan qoching. Masalan, "With a list, so I can't. Forget things" jumlasi noaniq va grammatik jihatdan noto'g'ri. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni 3-4 gapgacha qisqartiring va aniq fikrlarni ifodalang.

예시: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. It is very convenient and keeps me organized, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: Javobingizda grammatik xatolarga e'tibor bering, masalan, "it makes me to sure" o'rniga "it ensures" yoki "it helps me be sure" deyish kerak. Gaplarni bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va gaplarni qisqaroq, aniqroq qiling.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any tasks. Having a list in my hand is very convenient and improves my work process.

제안: Javobingizni yanada aniqroq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qiling. Masalan, "they don't have quite time" o'rniga "they don't have enough time" deyish kerak. Shuningdek, ortiqcha so'zlarni olib tashlang va gaplarni bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. "Anne also" so'zi noto'g'ri va tushunarsiz, uni olib tashlang.

예시: That's an interesting question. I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have enough time or they are not very organized. Also, some people may lack good time management skills.

제안: Javobingiz yaxshi, lekin ba'zi grammatik xatolarni tuzating, masalan, "I do list" o'rniga "I make a list" deyish kerak. Shuningdek, gaplarni yanada silliq bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va ortiqcha so'zlarni olib tashlang.

예시: It really depends. When I'm in a rush, I make a list on my phone, especially while shopping. However, if I have time and paper available, I prefer to write my list on paper because it's more convenient and reliable.

× With a list, so I can't. Forget things when I have a list on my hand.

✓ With a list, I can't forget things when I have it in my hand.

The original sentence has an incorrect sentence structure with unnecessary words and punctuation. Removing 'so' and the period after it creates a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× And. It's, you know, it's more organizing things.

✓ And, you know, it helps me organize things better.

The phrase 'it's more organizing things' is incorrect. The correction uses 'helps me organize things better' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× it makes me to sure that I don't forget anything.

✓ it makes me sure that I don't forget anything.

The verb 'make' is followed by the bare infinitive without 'to'. Therefore, 'to sure' is incorrect; it should be 'sure' without 'to'.

× Having a list in my hand helps a lot in my working process an because it's very convenient to.

✓ Having a list in my hand helps a lot in my work process because it's very convenient too.

The phrase 'working process an' is incorrect; 'an' should be 'and'. Also, 'convenient to' should be 'convenient too' to express addition. 'Working process' is better as 'work process'.

× I think some people they don't like making a list because they don't have quite time to do that.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list because they don't have enough time to do that.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people'. Also, 'quite time' is incorrect; it should be 'enough time' to express sufficient time.

× And for some people they are not organized or they don't have time management to do the list.

✓ And some people are not organized or don't have time management to make a list.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people'. Also, 'do the list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'.

× Anne also.

✓ And also.

'Anne' is a typo for 'And'. Correcting the typo clarifies the sentence.