List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏完整句子和具体内容。建议练习用完整句子直接回答问题，并补充简短的理由或细节。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议用完整句子表达是否制作工作清单，并说明清单如何帮助你。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and remember important things, which improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答不完整且不连贯，未能直接回答问题。建议明确表达观点，并给出具体原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory instead.

제안: 回答表达不清，句子结构混乱。建议用完整句子说明偏好，并解释原因。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me manage my trips and other tasks easily.

× So I know. I really don't. Girl 2. To buy, buy shopping.

✓ No, I really don't make a list when I shop.

原句结构混乱，无法表达完整意思。应使用完整句子表达否定回答，避免断句和无意义词汇。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点。

× Yeah, I wanna make is working. Gas. Must. Arrange medicine is working. Many things to do this this nest helps me a lot.

✓ Yeah, I want to make a list. It works. I must arrange medicine and many things to do. This list helps me a lot.

原句中代词使用混乱，句子不完整且含糊。应明确代词指代，使用完整句子表达意图。建议理清句子结构，正确使用代词和动词。

× So. Ask for me maybe, I think make nests for some tax tasks already. Sorry.

✓ So, for me, maybe I think making lists for some tasks is enough.

句子结构混乱，词语使用错误（如“make nests”应为“making lists”）。建议理清句子结构，使用正确词汇表达意思。

× I prefer. Make missed on my phone such as well I have a take a trip and a board so I need a range many things so I needed next to. And manage my trip.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because when I take a trip abroad, I need to arrange many things. So I need a list to manage my trip.

句子结构混乱，词汇错误（如“make missed”应为“make lists”，“a range”应为“arrange”）。建议使用完整句子，正确词汇，清晰表达意思。