List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to make your response more coherent by using complete sentences and linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about what you include in your shopping list.

예시: Yes, I usually make a detailed shopping list before I go grocery shopping. For example, I include daily essentials like fruits, vegetables, and other household items. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer has good content but is fragmented and lacks fluency. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, explain briefly how making a list helps you.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. For instance, if I have tasks to complete the next day, I write them down to stay organized. This method helps me accomplish all my work efficiently and reduces stress.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to use linking words and clearer expressions to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating words and be more concise.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete all the tasks within a day. Additionally, they might lack the time or energy to finish everything, so they prefer not to list their tasks to avoid feeling overwhelmed.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is fragmented and contains unclear sentences. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve grammar.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone using the Notes app because it allows me to easily check off completed tasks. This method is convenient and helps me avoid losing paper lists.

× I'm very organized person and I usually like to make proper lists before going to.

✓ I'm a very organized person and I usually like to make proper lists before going to.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'very organized person'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Grocery shopping, so yes, I make a proper list.

✓ Grocery shopping, so yes, I make a proper list.

This fragment is incomplete and awkwardly placed. It should be connected properly to the previous sentence or rephrased for clarity. However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes from the provided grammar problem list, and this is a sentence structure issue, it is noted here.

× Briar for example, the daily needs.

✓ For example, I list the daily needs.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Briar' seems to be a mishearing or typo. The sentence should be restructured to clearly express the idea. This is a sentence structure error.

× Fruit needs and everything and then because it makes.

✓ I include fruit needs and everything because it makes shopping easier.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb. It should be rephrased to convey the intended meaning clearly. This is a sentence structure error.

× Do growth.

✓ shopping more efficient.

This fragment is incomplete and unclear. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. It should be replaced with a phrase that completes the thought logically. This is a sentence structure error.

× Yes, I make a list for my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× For example, if I have to go.

✓ For example, if I have to go somewhere.

The sentence is incomplete and needs an object to be complete. Adding 'somewhere' or specifying the place completes the sentence.

× Do a particular work next day or make a proper list.

✓ do a particular task the next day, I make a proper list.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection. It should be combined and rephrased for clarity.

× I'd make A to do list and then ask for that To Do List.

✓ I'd make a to-do list and then follow that to-do list.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'ask for that To Do List' is unclear; 'follow that to-do list' is more appropriate.

× I complete every work, it makes my work.

✓ I complete every task; it makes my work easier.

The sentence is a run-on and unclear. It should be split and clarified.

× Accomplished as well as it makes me.

✓ accomplished, and it makes me feel productive.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to express the intended meaning.

× Some people don't like making lists, maybe because they they feel a pressure of doing all those works which are listed in a particular day and they might not have enough energy or time to complete those tasks.

✓ Some people don't like making lists, maybe because they feel pressure to do all the tasks listed for a particular day, and they might not have enough energy or time to complete them.

The sentence has redundancy ('they they'), incorrect article usage ('a pressure'), and awkward phrasing ('all those works'). It should be corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Tasks though that's why they might not want to get themselves pound.

✓ That's why they might not want to burden themselves with tasks.

The phrase 'get themselves pound' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'burden themselves with tasks'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and idiomatic expression.

× For me it is more convenient to make a list on my.

✓ For me, it is more convenient to make a list on my phone.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It should be completed to make sense.

× Notes app pick it because it gives a proper feature to take mark those which and those tasks which are all already done.

✓ I use the Notes app because it has a feature to mark tasks that are already done.

The sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words. It should be simplified and clarified.

× So it makes me.

✓ So it helps me stay organized.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to express the intended meaning.

× It makes it easy and also I don't forget the paper it and forget it like papers.

✓ It makes it easy, and I don't forget it like I would with paper lists.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. It should be rephrased for clarity and correctness.