List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use correct verb forms. Also, combine sentences to make your answer more natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I always make a list of items I need to buy before shopping because it helps me understand what is necessary and prevents impulse purchases.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and unclear parts (e.g., 'it also has me in saving time'). Try to use simpler, clearer expressions and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, clarify unclear terms like 'RE'.

예시: Yes, I make a daily list of tasks which helps me stay focused and organized. This way, I save time and feel satisfied when I complete my work.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'all whelming', 'try to. Award making a list'). Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and explain reasons clearly.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it overwhelming and stressful. They prefer to be spontaneous and flexible, and sometimes think making lists takes too much time.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences and adding a bit more detail. Avoid starting sentences with 'Because' and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand gives me a personal feeling and helps me remember better.

× Of items that needs to be purchased before I shop.

✓ Of items that need to be purchased before I shop.

The subject 'items' is plural, so the verb should be 'need' instead of 'needs' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It makes it It makes it easier for me to understand what is required and what is necessary.

✓ It makes it easier for me to understand what is required and what is necessary.

The phrase 'It makes it' is repeated unnecessarily, which is a sentence structure error related to conjunction or repetition. Removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× It also helps me in avoiding impulse buying.

✓ It also helps me avoid impulse buying.

The verb 'helps' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'in'. Using 'helps me in avoiding' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helps me avoid'.

× By making a list of tasks to be completed, it also has me in saving time and being more productive.

✓ By making a list of tasks to be completed, it also helps me save time and be more productive.

The phrase 'has me in saving' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'helps me save'. Also, parallel structure requires 'save time and be more productive'.

× When I accomplish tasks for the RE it makes me very happy and contented.

✓ When I accomplish tasks for the RE, it makes me very happy and contented.

A comma is needed after 'RE' to separate clauses properly, which is a sentence structure issue. However, no singular/plural error here; the sentence is otherwise correct.

× Some individuals do not prefer to make a list. As it is all whelming and this leads to stress and anxiety, they rather prefer to have spontaneity and flexibility and they try to. Award making a list because it may be time consuming at times.

✓ Some individuals do not prefer to make a list as it is overwhelming and leads to stress and anxiety; they rather prefer to have spontaneity and flexibility and try to avoid making a list because it may be time-consuming at times.

The original sentences have multiple sentence structure errors including incomplete sentences, incorrect word usage ('all whelming' should be 'overwhelming'), and misplaced punctuation. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would prefer to make a list on a paper.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable and does not need an article. The correct preposition phrase is 'on paper'.