List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. This way, I avoid buying unnecessary items and save money. For example, last week I only bought the things on my list and did not overspend.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why making a list works for you. Avoid irrelevant details and grammatical mistakes.

예시: Yes, I make a daily list for my work because it helps me stay organized. Every morning, I write down the tasks I need to complete, and when I finish them, I tick them off. This method helps me manage my time effectively.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain reasons logically using linking words like 'because' or 'some people think that'.

예시: Some people do not like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, they may feel that remembering tasks without a list is easier for them. For example, my friend prefers to work spontaneously without planning.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain why you prefer that method using simple and clear sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid unnecessary filler words.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient. I can easily add, delete, or rearrange items whenever I want. For instance, I use a note app to keep all my shopping lists organized.

× Yes definitely I make a list when I go for shopping or running group for a grocery cause a it's a remind me but which types of things I want to take or are not as well as a server keeping him from spending money spending money from unwanted thing.

✓ Yes, definitely I make a list when I go shopping or run errands for groceries because it reminds me of which types of things I want to take or not, as well as serving to keep me from spending money on unwanted things.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'types of things' which is plural but used unclearly, 'unwanted thing' should be plural 'unwanted things'. Also, 'a remind me' is incorrect; it should be 'reminds me'. The correction clarifies plural forms and improves sentence structure.

× That's why I make a list before going for I shopping.

✓ That's why I make a list before going shopping.

The phrase 'going for I shopping' is incorrect. The correct preposition is omitted here; 'going shopping' is the proper form without 'for' or 'I'. This correction removes unnecessary prepositions and pronouns.

× Because each and every person have their own twice or or a thinking and, uh, which persons are not making the list of their work?

✓ Because each and every person has their own views or thinking, and some people do not make a list of their work.

The subject 'each and every person' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'twice' is incorrect; likely intended 'views'. 'Which persons' is awkward; 'some people' is better. The correction addresses singular/plural agreement and word choice.

× Well, I mostly prefer or make a list on my mobile phone because, uh in other mobile phone, there are various types of ours and here why you are here, we will write a note as well as uh.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because on my phone there are various types of apps where you can write notes as well.

The phrase 'in other mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on my mobile phone'. Also, 'types of ours' is unclear; likely 'types of apps'. Prepositions are corrected to fit standard usage.

× We also rearrange the node which things I want to reconnect over Aria range as well as we are.

✓ We also rearrange the notes of the things I want to record or arrange as well.

The phrase 'rearrange the node' is incorrect; it should be 'rearrange the notes'. 'Reconnect over Aria range' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'record or arrange'. Prepositions and word choice are corrected for clarity.