List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不准确的问题，如“can makes”应为“can make”，“needed”应为“need”，以及“more efficiently”应为“more efficient”。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me know exactly what I need and makes my shopping more efficient. Usually, I list the most important items first, followed by some optional ones.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但存在语法错误，如“makes me more effective”前应加“it”，以及“so is a good habit”应为“so it is a good habit”。建议注意句子完整性和连接词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make lists for my work, especially for university homework, because I attend many classes and have a lot to do. Making lists helps me keep track of my studies and makes me more effective. So, it is a good habit to have.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“don't often make him list”应为“don't often make lists”，“since will change”缺少主语，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: Well, I think some people don't often make lists because they are not good at organizing things. Also, since situations can change over time and we can't predict everything, some people feel making a list is a waste of time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“use a paper”应为“have used paper”，“used to write”应为“used to writing”，以及“raised my interests”应为“raise my interest”。建议注意时态和固定搭配的正确使用，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I have been using paper for writing since primary school, so I'm used to writing things down. Also, I have some nice notebooks that make me more interested and encourage me to keep writing.

× Yes, I will always have a list before I go shopping because making a list can makes me be aware of what I really needed an makes my shopping more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I will always have a list before I go shopping because making a list can make me be aware of what I really need and makes my shopping more efficient.

动词makes在这里应为make，因为can后面接动词原形。needed应为need，保持时态一致。efficiently应为形容词efficient，修饰shopping。

× Most of the times I will list the most important things I have to buy an some optional things on my list.

✓ Most of the time I will list the most important things I have to buy and some optional things on my list.

times应为time，固定短语是most of the time。an应为and，拼写错误。

× So making a list really helps me to keep track of my study and makes me more effective.

✓ So making a list really helps me to keep track of my study and makes me more effective.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× So is a good habit.

✓ So it is a good habit.

句子缺少主语，应加it。

× Well, I think some people don't often make him list, maybe because they are not really good at organizing things and also since will change as time goes by and we can't predict everything.

✓ Well, I think some people don't often make their list, maybe because they are not really good at organizing things and also since things will change as time goes by and we can't predict everything.

him应为their，指代people。since后缺少主语，应补充things。

× So some people just don't want to waste time in making a list that cannot predict everything from happening.

✓ So some people just don't want to waste time making a list that cannot predict everything from happening.

waste time后不加in，直接接动名词。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I use a paper for writing since my primary school, so I'm used to write things down on paper and also I have some really nice list books that I can write things down on and they raised my interests and keep me writing things down.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I have used paper for writing since primary school, so I'm used to writing things down on paper and also I have some really nice list books that I can write things down in and they raise my interest and keep me writing things down.

use a paper应为use paper，paper不可数。since my primary school应为since primary school。used to后接动名词writing。write things down on应为write things down in（书本中）。raised应为raise，时态错误。interests应为interest，单数。